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1. Change the setting slightly
>Xak Tural is now properly outside the jurisdiction of the Dawnservant, it was one of Gulal Jaja's failures.
>Tuliyolal is facing a labor crisis, as technological innovation brought about from trade means there's a burgeoning population of former farmers and village craftsman seeking economic opportunity in the big city.

2. Slightly tweak the 4 candidates personalities and backgrounds.
>Wuk Lamat is now a country girl from Yak T'el, somewhat conflict averse due to her upbringing around the whole Hroth vs Lizard wars going on down there. Hardcore traditionalist that the current msq strong suggests, believes that Koana's futurism is killing the traditions that make Tural great
>Koana is properly from Shaaloani, massive futurist, resentful of people like Wuk Lamat who he perceives as clinging to long since irrelevant traditions
>Zoraal Ja's a military expansionist who believes that expanding Tural into an empire and conquering the northern lands would benefit the people greatly, instead of his frankly retarded plan of trying to conquer the whole planet despite his nation not even having a fucking navy
>Bakool Jaja's personality is now less outwardly malicious. He releases Valigarmanda because he authentically believes he can best it, but once he realizes he fucked up, he immediately comes to us to ask for help subduing it. This makes his act 2 face turn a little more believable

3. Structure.
>As the WoL, we're forbidden from directly participating in the rite as retainer of any of the candidates, while the scions are free to support a candidate.
>We're mainly focused on helping Krile and Erenville find the golden city while accompanying Estenian in hunting down various Vidraal, and we bump into the candidates occasionally for dungeons and whatnot.
>No rubber bullets. Even if no one dies during that scene, dont fucking say rubber bullets man that shit sucks ass.