>>49442304
>This is probably my favorite entry in a while
Thanks for saying as much by the way, though I will keep what you said about unknown character names in-mind. Stylistically, there /sort of/ is a reason why I've been writing like that but it's small potatoes and if it helps with the flow for readers then I can manage.
>It's funny to imagine Sanae thinking Renko was a hallucination from sleep deprivation.
It'd be the perfect way to set up her next appearance in the story as well which I will be penning down for the future, thanks again. You described the appeal of Renko's dream-hopping pretty well which is nice to see cause that idea was very off the cuff for me. Almost thought I wouldn't be able to get to that this entry, partially why it is so long. Speaking of,
>The original Alice story benefited a lot from its more concise structure.
Another thing I've done some reflection over, especially since overwriting is a genuine fault of mine, and I'm setting a hard limit for myself for the next part: the total final word count will only make it the third lengthiest entry so far if it has to be that long. Otherwise I'm aiming for a much tighter pace to things next time.
>would she be able to figure out that 2hu tsukumogami are the not just the objects they hold?
She's a pretty smart girl, I don't see why not.
>Would Maribel figure out where Renko is and try to reach her?
Tut tut Anon, I can only reveal so much ahead of time~ ^^
>>49445334
>A Renko thread will get made in 2 days. This is your only warning.
The next entry will begin within the final days of that thread sometime within the next 2 or 3 days. This is your only warning :)
>>49673402
And now she can be free to finally get the rest that she deserves...
Good job MerryBerry.