>>24475678
OP this was my post and I gave you a bad score. I enjoy writing poetry and decided to come back to help.
>>24477565
You had me until you said the score and you doubt your own ability which makes me sad. We are all dumbasses and no need to demean yourself senselessly. I looked up Heather and it's a type of purple shrubbery.
>OP
Remove February from the title. Remove it's a from the first line. Spear-topped breeze is is better to describe trees so rework that sentence such as combining it with the razorblade treeline sentence. The disgruntled farmers part is better as a second sentence. Shotgun shell sentence should be closer to the farmer part. Numb ears could be the first sentence. To whom could be the first sentence near pass-byers. Slab of cartilage is useless. Restating the title at the end is cringe. So do another whip and consider my notes. Maybe I could double your score to a 3/5 if you took my advice. Keep writing. There is something here but you need to just flat out remove some parts to make it flow. Your poem reminds me of going to the dentist at its current state. I feel better after finishing it and did not enjoy the process. Keep trying. :)