>>24576779
Tell me how lame my book is based on these chapters.
Chapter 1:
>MC is a hostage of not-Kublai Khan
>he asks permission to leave to rule his own vassal kingdom
>not-Kublai agrees but insist another noble come along to monitor him
Chapter 2:
>MC, deuteragonist, and 100 men behind to travel the steppes
>They discovered that not-Kublai Khan's favorite concubine had disguised herself as one of the men escorting them
>they conclude that
>1) one of the not-Kublai's advisors had assisted her escape
>2) they will be accused of abducting her
>3) search party is its way to kill them all
Chapter 3:
>MC and deuteragonist interview the concubine and debate what to do
>MC comes up with a plan to deal with the search party
Chapter 4 (unreleased):
>told from the search party leader's POV as they discover the party

That's probably not a lot of stuff happening for 4K words