I’m going to level with you all, I really don’t know the direction to take HILTLH(H) in terms of plot and development. I have several ideas, but every time I think about them, issues crop up (taking away from Loona, not having it be personal to Anon and Loona, not having relation to stuff that’s happened, ect.)
Might take a while to see what I can do. I already gotta rewrite Ch. 5’s beginning. This is the hard part in getting characters and a setting right in a worldview that already has noticeable problems and disdain from a non-minor section of the audience.