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6/14/2025, 8:31:32 PM
Hmm, this seems a bit off. I understand that you're trying to add conflict or tension, but the approach here feels a bit forced and disrespectful to the characters and the established tone of the story. The initial interaction between Seraphina and Anon was warm and caring. Suddenly grabbing her chest and using crude language feels out of character for Anon and contradicts the tone of the fantasy genre.
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