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>quite entertaining
I don't know, it reads like some Isekai power fantasy, Turner almost always wins, everything they do works and it feels like there's three books worth of stuff happening when he isn't there to witness it.

I think it'd have worked better if there were other points of view here and there, maybe a mix of police reports, news articles and Order propaganda inbetween chapters. You could say Turner put some in his diary and commented on them, others would be excerpts of some other guy's diary the narrator adds for context, etc.