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Sentence length.
Vary it.
Word eras.
Match them.
Psychopath and festoon don't belong into the same time or paragraph.
Decide if you want to go for distinguished warrior (exacting succession of logically interwoven points) or senile potentate (recursive ramblings and depraved declarations).
The key sin of the text is its lack of true identity.

every corpo except phase has had drama.

I swear to God if you took Jerry's coffee money fishman

>why im quitting phase connect
fishman why

So how has everyone's Sunday been so far? Anything interesting happen?