>>7647479
https://files.catbox.moe/gk9rzy.jpg
I can't believe you still struggle with basic anatomy. The torso was too long and ribcage was lacked definition. The colors were good but the values were too patchy in the shadow part. The face also looked a bit symbol-drawn. A few other subtle things I didn't mention.
>>7647505
Just a few things. Mainly the neck