>>7644208
In all seriousness I think it could be improved by using his cloak as a cover up and just rendermaxxing it.
1.Tiny hand idk what to do. Could be covered with coat
2. , skull lower half is shit or you'll have to ask for a ribcage wth negative space and to make the underlying lines bone decay. Or boobs, maybe say that it's supposed to be a welcoming death or something