Does this look okay? It's meant to be a shitpost but also cute.

I'm a beg but eh, might as well try my luck here. Any ideas on how to improve my shitpost? Being a joke doesn't excuse low quality.

>>81539838
I like making art of cute characters with big round eyes like Ragatha.
R34 tends to like my women but keeps rejecting any art I've made of R.E.P.O. characters. I don't know why it's so hard for me to make them look appealing, they're technically much easier to draw.

>>7613408
I feel like this could actually be kinda nice if I could figure out the background. Problem is I have zero clue what I'm doing. Anyone have any tips?