>>537768084
I believe in my translation.

>>537766884
Kinda, but I don't think you can get closer to the original than this in both meaning and how it rhymes. It's pretty much 1:1 for JP, no? Except grief and pain are switched and I forgot to swap hold back for endure.
>Seven girls stand on the witness stand. Enduring pain, grief plain, their eyes meet.
I guess.