>>8988213
it's good that it comes across this way, since i wanted the cashier to appear as a smaller and feeble character in order to make the other mature character appear more imposing, but i might disappoint you. the cashier is irrelevant. it's actually the mature woman on her own which i want to be the subject to this piece, since i find the contrast interesting. i just have to think about how to develop the next scene naturally. i'll think about the brand name more, it has to be feasible
>>8988216
accessories would be good hints for readers, but the nature of the character is that she is hiding the fact that she is into it behind her outward mature display, finding the taboo part of the act arousing, so accessories would go against it
>>8988408
thank you