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Positives
>Good designs for most of the characters
>The Aesthetics and Music are both good and compliment each other
>Editing is good
>Animation is good when it needs to be
>The difference between the Pencils and Rotoscoping is nice world building and opens up for how other forms of animation like Claymation and CGI would work here
>Loki is actually a pretty alright character despite Pan's terrible voice acting
Bad
>Pan's voicing three characters and it's grating on the ears
>Human's are too stylized, the uninitiated are going to confuse the humans with IRLs
>Loki's "civilian" design seems pointless and unnecessary, just keep him looking like Pimp Aku and we're golden
>Bianca's troubles are weak, she comes across as neurotic and useless when the actual process of fighting with your IRL seems piss easy
>Minty's Boss has a terrible design
>Should have used the weird Wifi thing
>Speaking of the Wifi thing, if it's treated like an insane guaranteed win powerup then Bianca and Loki should be more known as the weird unpredictable dangerous guys ostracized from their peers and not these loser clowns who can't do anything
>Bianca's sudden shift in confidence felt too out of nowhere
Overall 7/10, it's not perfect but it's not dog trash. It falters but does give a good idea about what the world Bianca lives in is like. It's essentially Yugioh where playing Cards is the biggest thing in the world but instead of card's you're creating life through art and then having legal dogfights with them
I could see this getting picked up if shopped around enough. Compared to other Online Cartoon/Art Reviewer pilots this is probably the better one out there since Pan's not too autistic he can't spare a moment to learn how to draw or didn't start being a reviewer specifically to try and smear others