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No other porn game besides SB had made me angry it's a porn game so I cant replay a bit for my brother to show the downright hilarity of the river boat fantasy scene. Personally I think for a porn game (which cannot be overstated) your writing is second bar none. Personally I think you overdo it a tad with the references. Especially towards the third quarter of SB, but it's really hard to get mad at a guy running a slower second lap when people arent off the starting block in other lanes.

Im gonna go against the grain (and I know which board im in right now sorry) and say more vore is better for CfC. It fits those characters better and the threat is far more overtly evil than the previous. There's no accidental mind control here they deserve death (like the instant jump cut bit to the goons being dead I liked that).

I did recently introduce a friend of mine to your game and she was put off because there is a long "time between porn, especially vore it needs more vore" so to speak. That's entirely a subjective call because again your game offers more than only big tummy content. Oh also she wanted Petar to openly on screen fuck his best friend. I figure that one may noooot be the sort of game you and clinko are looking to garner though. But it does bring up a certain point of note. Your game won't please everyone. I know either way I'll be a seal and clap for content.