>>42290500
I totally forgot to mention, but to preempt some of the "but it's too obvious" comments: It's a good thing. Yes, a lot of the time it's kind of obvious where the story will go next. For example, when Rarara tries the possession spell, you'd have to be blind to not see her using it to make Twilight "kill" her, and also that she would survive it because duh—undead, unbeating heart.
However! It is obvious because of how well the fic conveys its tone and atmosphere, themes, etc. It really immerses the reader in what it's trying to tell (at least it did for me) and the suspicion of what will happen next is deliberately used to add to the tension, as evidenced by, for example, the plentiful remarks that things will go south soon. That's good writing, not bad writing.
There's much more that I'd like to say, but it's probably best to leave it at this for now.
Oh right, VOTING:
Some ideas, but I'll have to look for more things to put on the list soon:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/375944/one-white-unicorn
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/86542/winds-of-change
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/191237/ghost-of-a-rose
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/566978/maize +
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/525598/a-skeleton-in-the-closet
