>>282057670
Good setup, but it needs a training arc after the first 3 introduction chapters.
>>282058160
Also Madoka has an elder Brother who is a male Meguca and is the strongest and killer her entire village
>>282057787
Good idea, but needs a twist, how about making making the MC gay? Aliens are hitting on him, but he just wants to return to his boylover

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