>>7778502
besides the hair, which proportions are off? i feel like i did a pretty good job at eyeballing it, it's not perfect but i figured i wouldn't aim for perfection

i'll try doing another sketch starting with the glabella for my next drawing. i did draw a square for the forehead on my first draft. but there's no denying my sketch feels a bit "flat" in spite of it, i hoped to fix it with shadows while coloring