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I kinda just thought "there should be a big army presence" and I decided I didn't want to bother with all that when I got to the final fight so yeah I wonder if I should try to rewrite that. I wouldn't mind if someone decided that Shinigamis can revive their servants or something, but I liked writing Kagayaki for all he was worth.
>producing so much writing in a short timeframe is impressive.
I took scriptwriting classes, so what I do is I think about the biggest beats I want in a story and then think of how to chain them together to get something coherent. For The Riddle Part 1, I started with a simple pitch: "the SC does Waiting for Godot but it's Scarlet Senshi". I wanted a situation where Kaoru's secret was in jeopardy. I found a cool enemy in someone else's story and went from there, I used several characters through other writefags to further them and mutually build cool arcs, and in Part 2 I really wanted all these characters to confront the core of their arcs in some way, but at the core of it all is a vision about who Kaoru is, psychologically speaking.
Kaoru wants to be a hero, she wants to do what she thinks is right for others, but she's been hurt in a way that gave her severe trust issues that drive her to keep secrets from even her closest allies. The idea of "the riddle" in-universe, aside from just being a reference from the Broadway adaptation of The Scarlet Pimpernel, is a representation of her secrets. Her double life, her background and her deep-seated issues. The entire arc is about how she brings her walls down, little by little. First, by being forced to get along with someone who's arguably even weirder than her, then by battling alongside her friends and giving words of wisdom to Takaishi (who she's also crushing on), and now the latest battle required her to start trusting the Student Council fully (plus, Yae knows now). The crux of the arc is, what will it take for Kaoru to entirely bring her walls down?