>>106153191
awesome! I only have a few possible suggestions
106036891 something like that for panel 2
-maybe a bit more terror/fear on alana's expression
I assume the internal shot will be more detailed in the final version
>>106153573
fire alana is canon nopan
it could make sense, her top could be pulled down a little bit and there could be an exposed boob or something. the final panel with kirsche fondling her tits would be another great spot for it