>>8740769
>Chinetsu just needs to improve his art a little bit more
I like it, a lot. His art is rough but it conveys the roughness and the intensity of the sex well, which is perfect for NTR. The page you posted is very very good, perfect example imo (just look at the veins on her feet, the orgasm must be so good and powerful). Not only the art but the whole layout/panelling is also above average for a NTR doujin. Art aside i think the scenario was also quite good. I really love the part where the netori guy went as far as sending a message to the boyfriend without her knowing just to create a "cheating sex while my bf is close" situation and to "force" her to accept raw sex, fucking loved it.