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>no focal point
>flat lighting
>bad composition
>bad texturing/uv unwrapping(pic rel)
>bad post processing
The worst issue is by far the fact that you already listed issues yourself yet insetead of fixing them yourself, you posted the render anyway. This already shows you're not at all a perfectionist, you'd lose any job interview just for that
Do a search for Junior environment artist on Artstation, which is where you're supposed to be skill wise at least after 5 years, and see for yourself if you're as good or nah
Example: https://www.artstation.com/helenaehhansen