Where do I even fucking start.....
Okay. Let's start with the lines.
MAJOR CRITIQUE 1) SHITTY LINES
This drawing, as well as all of Birdie's other SHIT has absolutely NO FUCKING SENSE OF LINE WEIGHT. Speaking of line weight, The outlines are way too FUCKING THICK. And of course she gets the fucking collar bone wrong. *sigh*
That leads us into....
MAJOR CRITIQUE 2) ANATOMY
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How do I begin? Let's start with the eyes. That's the most noticeable. The eyes are literally fucking touching. In real life that shouldn't be fucking even anatomically possible. Worse still, LOOK AT THE FUCKING MOUTH. It extends DOWN TO THE BOTTOM OF THE CHIN. That is genuine RETARDATION.
Also, this hunk of SHIT only features 4 fingers on each hand. Humans have 10 fingers, five on each hand. Not even mentioning Birdie doesn't account AT ALL for the skeletal and muscular structure of the hand.
And are those bat wings coming out of her... waist?
OH MY FUCKING GOD LOOK AT THOSE EARS. Those look like....are you fucking serious? Do I even need to explain it?
The hair has an incredibly noticeable severe lack of detail. Hair in real life is meant to fragment into both clumps and individual strands. Picrel, model Irene Nell.
Do I even need to mention the nails?
MAJOR CRITIQUE 3) SHADING
THE SHADING. WE FINALLY GET TO THE FUCKING SHADING. It's:
1) Too simplistic.
2) Inconsistent.
3) SHIT.
It looks like there are multiple light sources in this image. PICK ONE AND SHADE FROM THERE. This is closer to PILLOW SHADING than actual shading.
Not to mention the shading on the hair. Picrel is again relevant for hair.
4) EPILOGUE
I've probably left a LOT out. But I'm too tired to continue writing this, and I have to log in for work in 30mins.