>>942151522
You are biased
>>942151528
Damn it's far lengthier than I anticipated. So far so good, got me a chub even during the bj phase. A shame he hits her :(
Your prose's good but needs refinement and some proofreading. I don't know about the rest, but I saw some minor mistakes. Like ecchi instead of echo. Might be an autocorrect issue lol. 8/10 so far