I apreciate the feedback so much. I'm gonna use less images, in order to not saturate the image bump limit.

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CHAPTER 1: I'VE LOST MY DEERS EYE

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>Rubble, dust, burned leaves, fallen trees
>Everywhere little Angel looked, there was nothing but the aftermath of a bloody persecution
>Anything, but his precious deer's eye
>Yesterday, he saw it go away into the forest, by itself
>That wasn't good
>Right in the middle of the night too
>He figured he'd go early in the morning
>Which he did
>Today he had gone out through the rabbit hole in Fluttershy's sanctuary
>Its super easy to traverse through it
>It is just a manner of pattern memorization, and following the signs on each path
>All the paths he made branch from Fluttershy's home
>Therefore, if he gets lost, all he has to do is look back
>Obviously, Fluttershy doesn't know about this
>Why would she? A rabbit as proud as Angel can only share so much of its affairs with the rest of the animals
>As a result, if Angel doesn't come back by the next day, Fluttershy will immediately start looking for him
>And she'll start asking her friends to help, if it takes him that long to return home
>Pinkie Pie is notoriously good at finding him
>Unfortunately for Angel, he wasn't going home without his deer's eye
>He was just that comitted to finding it
>Fortunately, he followed one of the bird's directions into the mountains
>It only took him 3 hours to reach the outskirts of Canterlot
>So it was still early
>That's when he encountered...
>someone else
>Green coat, with a dark grey mane
>He actually can't remember the last time he saw one of those ponies
>And just as quickly as he spotted him, he called out his name
>And then, he saw something come out of the woods
>He saw Him
>He never liked Him, from the very first day he appeared in Ponyville
>His fake smile, his fake charisma
>All hiding something different that Angel himself was too fearful to ask
>This is why his deer's eye was so important to him
>To protect him and ward off the evil spirits
>''Oh, Angel?''
>Unfortunately, it found him
>His voice brought him back to the present
>Before he could even move an inch, he was immobilized by green magic
>That's when He entered his field of view
>''You know I've been looking for you all day, right? Fluttershy said you didn't say anything''
>Anon, as he called himself, had the biggest shit eating grin on his face
>Something Angel despised deeply
>''The way I see it, its just the two of us now...''
>Angel is then, levitated, and brought face to face with the unicorn
>Anon drops his smile suddenly
>''..and I would like to keep it that way''
>He brings him closer, almost eye to eye
>''Capish?''
>Angel has no option but to frantically nod
>Upon doing so, he falls on his butt upon being released
>''Good boy!''
>A sudden, spark of magic happens behind the two of them
>From it, a purple alicorn appears
>''Anon! How is-''
>She stops mid sentence
>''What happened here?''
>He shrugs

[CONT]