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>noooo i dont want to talk about BBBY in the BBBY thread (the one with the gamestop logo)
You do a phenomenal job maximizing your thesis's unreadability by cramming as many rhetorical questions, clauses, asides as you can.
> Overloading sentences with clauses, asides, and rhetoricals,
> Overloading with side comments
> Stacking emotionals
> Shifting topics & pivoting rhetoricals,
If you actually care about this, which we're all pretty sure you dont, fucking get your point across and stop writing like a redditor/youtube documentary.