>>11404163
Don't disagree, needed Emmie to make more good girl decisions to make it less weird how she is treated. Having her make more moral choices would have really helped out the story and her. Make her less of a gremlin who exists for food. I'll take the insufferable comment in stride.

I'm surprised you don't like Bad Borken, I thought that area came out well. I enjoyed Esse's/ ETV character a lot. What would have been better for you?

>>11404240
A lot of truth in here that I won't contest, though I ask you not to blame Clinko for Emmie's personality. I still write everything so ultimate responsibility comes down to me. As much as I like adding in the vore stuff personally I don't think they are canon. I know this isn't helped by all the vore scenario's that I keep putting the gang in, (including something upcoming very soon!) so please accept my apologies.

What's up with Cause for Concern? Is it too clean? What's got you not interested?

>>11404245
Honestly, the decision was made because it was a huge challenge for me to come up with two different scenarios each time. Sometimes I would only have like 1 good idea for a section, or an idea that I really wanted to do and wanted to be "canon" or whatever.

This definitely made it much harder for the glutton v pure, and to what you said, everyone would just pick glutton anyway, or get mad that the Pure route had the stuffing scene. Definitely reduced Emmie's complexity, but a lot easier for me.