It's unremarkable edgeslop but the power system of individually empowering each part of your body could be something really neat to play.
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Ghost of a Tale and Tails of Iron may be something you'd like.
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>"All right then. I don't suppose I need to worry about a Bringer causing trouble."
>"Indeed. Rather, we Bringers try to bring as much brightness as we can bring. That's why we're called Bringers."
>"I hope that wasn't some retarded attempt at humor."
>"Umm...Seeing that I'm not mentally disabled, I would have to say no. It was a simple joke."
>"No. If you think that was a joke, you most definitely are mentally disabled."
don't compare your slop to real authors, junior
>"All right then. I don't suppose I need to worry about a Bringer causing trouble."
>"Indeed. Rather, we Bringers try to bring as much brightness as we can bring. That's why we're called Bringers."
>"I hope that wasn't some retarded attempt at humor."
>"Umm...Seeing that I'm not mentally disabled, I would have to say no. It was a simple joke."
>"No. If you think that was a joke, you most definitely are mentally disabled."
don't compare your slop to real authors, junior