Reached this scene... yah it is still as bad @_@ R07 is really bad at writing emotional scenes... he can do fine with fun scenes of the girls goofing together, he can write good Mystery (some of his ways to reach certain plots are totally Rworded)... but that is it... there is no other good quality to his writing... the guy is truly a hack if this what he is like and he get all of this fame and love from /vn/ cuties @_@