Need help with revisions. This is for chapter 4 of my fanfic:

At exactly 7:00 AM, the elevator opens to the Hotel's first floor, with ****** and Vanta exiting it and walking towards the breakfast buffet's location. In order for them to secure a table within the dining area, the couple first find a suitable table of their liking, and once they found one, Vanta volunteers to stay at their table and allows ****** to get her food first before he does. With a lot of people lining up in the food area of the buffet, he estimates that it will take his girlfriend around ten minutes to get the food that she wants for breakfast, so he waits by checking Discord on his phone. As he does so, he then goes to the Krisis server that only he, Wilson, and Zali can access, and then reads in their server's general chat to see what his friends are up to. Upon checking the chat's contents, he begins to laugh at his friends joking in the chat about whether or not Vanta would give them souvenirs from his Rome trip. Vanta hasn't told Wilson and Zali of his relationship with ******, and that his date with her is the reason why he is in Rome, telling them the excuse of being in hiatus for personal reasons, so he is a little anxious that his friends might find out about the relationship.

Vanta: It's 7 am here in Rome. Good morning Krisis!

Wilson: Morning Vanta. How's Rome so far?

Zali: Good Morning! I see that you are also an early bird like me. What are your plans for today?

Vanta (reply to Wilson): Rome's great! Just last night I had a great time watching a play at Teatro Dell'Opera Di Roma! I also had a nice dinner here at a hotel.

Vanta (reply to Zali): Well, breakfast here at the hotel opens up at 7 am, and I want to eat early so I can start today's trip early, and I have a lot of places to go.

Wilson: And you plan to go to them just all by yourself?

Vanta: I don't see any problem in that. Why are you asking?

Zali: Well, it's just that I find it weird that you're planning on touring Rome just all by yourself.

Wilson (reply to Zali): Same here. I just find it weird that you're all alone there. Are you sure you'll be fine touring by yourself?

Vanta: Don't worry. It's not like it's my first time going to places alone without any company, right?

As you can see, the discord chat above is not yet finished.