Jannies finally approved my fiction, so its on RR. Just published chapter 2, any good, or shit?

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/128319/labours-of-zucchini-progression-fantasy-sci-fi

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/128319/labours-of-zucchini-progression-fantasy-sci-fi/chapter/2508027/chapter-2-adventure-awaits