>>149799897
>with actual plot and more time to develop the characters and better page composition
Yeah, those are the weak points of the comic.
I feel like the world building is good, but too complex to be shown in such a short time. Also, more characters are being introduced, and that makes the development of the existing ones suffer.
Maybe next time he will plan the comic better. Reading it feels like when a kid tells you about something that happened and tells very fast, barely breathing, and mentions details that don't matter. Picrel.
Like, he's too enthusiastic about his ideas and new characters, so they're dumped into the narrative.

But not even that is terrible. Those are the weaker points, but they're not that bad that they ruin the comic.
The designs are so good, the characters so hot, and the sex scenes so well made that it's still a great read. Nina is adorable and even though she became a sperm lover and a fucker, somehow she remains innocent and sweet.