This is quick and dirty because unlike some of you NEET nodraws I got shit to do.
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It's actually not is why I beef with it. The values are technically worse and the composition no longer has any really draw points. He didn't go through and correct the drawing itself so much as the design, which to be completely honest, i think needs work from the ground up. I don't think the character design needs changing(and in some cases, that could be something that can't be changed - something Saito should know). Saito's "correction" is bland and tones down or eliminates any interesting elements from the original. he said himself he wasn't sure he got what the original was trying to go for, which is a massive red flag that he should have stopped right there.