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Let's compare it.

>You there… I have a good omen for you
>You there… I'm getting a good omen
Zane worded it better but it's pretty much the same thing.

>Fortune telling again…?
>Another fortune telling?
Same as above.

>Skipping might make your body's movements sharper
>If you skip while walking, your love life with the same sex will improve
Sharper body movements basically translate to better love life, not sure about the same sex part as I didn't read any studies about it.

>Might be true, might not be
>The chance of it coming true is 53%
Zane made a better translation because Seira doesn't talk about percentage at all.

>vertical dots
>horizontal dots
Zane made effort to have it in the horizontal text style like how it's read in english.

>My… my pupil!
>Oh! She's so hot, how can I not fuck her!!
The "dokyuun" sfx on Hisame's reaction showcases that Hisame found it very loveable which in turn will end up in sex.

In conclusion, it's not that far off.