>>24806757
alright, well heres mine. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/77729/progressive-detective-all-over-again
it hasnt been updated on royalroad but ive been spending months rewriting it on docs so the narrative can flow well. the premise is about detectives that solve magic cases but my main problem that was holding me back was making the cases feel "realistic" which was a black hole. so i shifted to a more dramatic approach with the antagonists feeling like something out of No More Heroes, if you know that game