>>543812938
it has a ton of things wrong with it but Ill explain the dynamic of pockets early game build wise

any build that asks for burst early, needs to prio imp spirit and mystic shot, cloak is your only way to proc burst before 2 upgrades of suitcase, imp spirit raises both mystic shot and suitcase past this threshold, additionally builds that emphasize this early powerspike are sacrificing something else, be it slots, cultist timing, or maj leap timing, you need to find what spike you prefer, for instance I always go cold front and then either mystic shot/enchanters emblem depending on the game, so I can get cultist around 8 minutes every time and start my snowball, you have a ton of useless fluff that delays every single power spike pocket has, stuff like mystic regeneration, kdash, soul shredder, headhunter, all of that is absolut trash on pocket because the opportunity cost wrecks his impact, you need to be scaling fast and stealing camps, none of those items help him do that

try dews buld for an all around scaling version of pocket, or eidos build for an early game focused skirimish style, once you get comfortable with that you can try something like natan for a barrage dueling focused build or try gay shit like maj leap rush which I hate