>>96495381
You're still a bit away from even your first draft, but some changes you can make now is tightening up your language.
>using 'Small' twice to describe the in-game conflict within the first sentence
>if the process of determining success of both shooting and melee is the same, you can combine it into one sentence.
>to determine whether an attack hits their target (either shooting or melee)... ect ect.
I like that you used actual photos of models. I would also consider uploading these rules to a drive/mega - it just means that if you can update your rules without constantly reuploading to catbox with a different link.