continuing from >>8767771

>>8768072
>>8768091
Chapter 2 was an early sign of how poorly written this was going to be, but people hoped that chapter 3 wouldn't share the same writing issues as Chitose. When the president nonchalantly agreed to blow Aoyama, the main character (MC) just watched somewhat in shock and didn't react logically. I understand that he's supposed to be cowardly and pathetic, but there aren't even any dialogue boxes showing his inner thoughts to indicate that he's surprised. Even a little "What the hell...!?" would have sufficed. Him being awkward around the Prez after she finishes would have given us something, but there's literally nothing there. The whole "you're guilty" ending of the second chapter doesn't make sense after the Prez does that in the same chapter. As others have said, chapter 3 is 80 pages of nonstop action with no character development or explanation for why Prez is acting the way she is. There is no scene after the orgy either. The crazy part is that this could have been fine if the past two chapters were more than just setup and nonsensical scenes, like when Prez blows the other guy. Even worse, having a much larger cast than Chitose means we'll have chapters focusing on other characters. This will likely result in entire chapters where we don't see the Prez much, and we we'll have less chapters tp learn why she's behaving this way, if that ever gets addressed. Given Seto's release schedule, this could seriously damage the story. Imagine if Chapter 4 focuses solely on the swim team and we barely see the MC or the Prez. Wouldn't that be awful after leaving us with this kind of cliffhanger?

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