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The problem is Alephkeller is reluctant to actually have the Daxy race face the consequences of their actions in any meaningful way. He's also reluctant to fully demonize them even though he's depicted them doing some godawful shit numerous times. He's added some lore in order to "justify" their actions and make them seem "benevolent" but at the end of the day everything awful that happens is because they are egotistical feminazi imperialist who think its their right to rule all other aliens and slowly kill out their female populations and become the parasitic replacement. I mean three stories in and we're still at the "barely anything happens and miseryporn" stage of things. The male protagonist, his depressed drug addict buddy, and his unlikable lizard "girlfriend" have been on the run for three whole stories. And there are way too many sideplots that go on at the same time. Only recently have things actually been cultivated into something. Also the actual erotica aspect of it isn't even that good, and I know that might be because I'm not a fan of femdom… but I've read femdom fics that actually does a good job at it and are pretty hot. Way better than these body odor fetish shit.

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>>150175570
Since you're probably going to keep asking this whenever someone criticize it I'll just say that I did read the Assignment Risk series, but haven't read the most recent chapters from the third installment Risk Compensation because I've gotten bored and given up on having faith that Alephkeller will actually make a good story out of this. Alephkeller's remarks over the past two year or so has made it clear to me that whatever his planning for story is something I will not enjoy at all. Honestly the worst thing about it all is that DoctorDJ became obsessed with Aleph's dumb fanfic so now I have to see these dollar store deathclaws be given visual life.