>>7689037
Sorry, anon, but 4chan isn't really a good format for this because we need to talk back and forth, so I'll be brief. I have no idea what you were trying to do with that construction from but it doesn't make much sense. You should try to be more structured like pic related. Not necessarily the same way.
I think you're getting a bit ahead of yourself here though. If you want to improve at construction focus only on that part and pick easier poses that aren't obscured or too foreshortened.