I’m starting writing NTR stories (collaborating with an artist) and have completed a couple already. I want a few done before I start releasing them so I have a backlog.

My intention is to cater to the ‘hard’ NTR fans. By that I mean the stories are closer to ‘blackmail’ and ‘crying’ tags than ‘hypnosis’ and ‘ahegao’.

I want the stories to be as realistic as possible while still being satisfying. So no tepid blackmail (a kid pissing on a grave causing the mother to go full slit, for example), and definitely no mind-control shenanigans or inconsistent characters.

I would appreciate feedback on some of the projects I’ve drafted below, but have yet to begin producing. Other feedback for you ‘dream NTR’ story would be great.

>A devoted husband and father (MC) is tormented by an obnoxious work rival. The rival meets his wife at a work event, and promises the MC that he will fuck her eventually. The MC is then murdered by the work rival, who stages it to look like an accident. After acting sympathetic at the funeral and connecting over social media, the rival befriends the widow, and eventually fucks her after time has passed (18 months?). Years later, finds the MC’s daughter on a dating site. She has daddy issues due to trauma with the murder. He offers to ‘mentor’ her and fucks her too. Entire story is witnessed by MC, who remains as an invisible ghost.

>MC breaks up with High School sweetheart as they both leave for university and he believes she wants to leave him. However, both realise it’s a huge mistake and genuinely love each other. He wants to reconcile with her. Before he can, the girl goes out with friends in her hometown. She cries in the restroom, gets drunk, dances. She’s seen by the MC’s childhood bully, who once killed the MCs beloved childhood pet. He approaches her and, after using a misleading photo to make her think her ex has moved on, pressures her into having revenge sex with him in an alley.