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This is fine as-is.
It didn't need 6 hours of wordslop bloat and phony half-assed attempts at trying to be deep.
The plot drives itself on Grody and [Blank] and wisely chooses to lean more heavily on HSR lore than Fate clapping.
We don't need a half-dozen people wishing for well-intentioned crap, then being lectured by a fucking Charmony Dove how it's "not earned" and "not real". Because you know that is EXACTLY what everything you just described leads to, a complete rehash of not using wishes or dreams to fix reality, blah blah blah.
This reminds me I should save a few images of the bird, like Lygus and the Puzzle one, just for moments like this.
