>>106966408
That looks pretty good to me.
I don't follow all of the settings under the model. I'm using custom loras made for seele. You can try using the noob version and see if it improves the line art. Also, I linked my settings as well.
https://civitai.com/models/269772?modelVersionId=1857360
Settings
https://civitai.com/articles/11427/my-current-sdxl-settings