>>545632087
Good job, I'm struggling a lot at certain scenes, but it's a really cool VN. I find it really cool how it references certain real, existing events or people and then changes them to fit with the setting.
I specifically loved the fight between Kageaki and Sorimachi, where the immelmann turn (first time hearing about it) was mentioned, except here it was changed to be a weird martial arts move taught by a Japanese guy to a german kid who then learned to incorporate it into flight battles.
Really fun and creative and simultaneously educational.
I also like how Kageaki actually gets outskilled by a lot of his opponents that many of his wins are attributed to either bullshit powers, chance or by virtue of him having a shin'uchi. It makes me want to root for him more and it also makes the fights way more engaging to read. I'm only at chapter 5 though, going into Kanae's route.