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>>95918034 (OP)
OC by Foxpeng1, not by me.

https://imgchest.com/p/qe4g5jzro7j

>please tell me the Hanged Man is a guy
Brother, is he CALLED the Hanged Woman?
No?
I think you're safe.

>Want to make a CYOA
>Want to make a CYOA based around the pasta people and mafio's.
>Want to give the Player luxuries in home and what they do as a pasta man and familia
>But want to make the Player the Master of a group of armed maids who serve as the main companions against other familia of mafios
Bros what's wrong with me?

>>95918034 (OP)
>>95918041
Nice, lots of options though it feels after a while like you're setting a cruise ship (like the one boomers go) rather than a private yatch, but I guess smoozing with the high class is part and parcel of being rich.
Me? I would be happy with a nice, cool ship to look outside when bored from gaming and having just the bare amount of people.

>>95918160
What's wrong with any of that? sounds like you have a unique and engaging idea. I love that we get both the comforts and luxury that come with being head of a familia, and the tactical side too. I just hope that the armed maids don't look like typical french maid costume types, that they're actually cool.

Gil my beloved…

>>95918034 (OP)
AI could be sassier. She should say "zako, zako" while teasing me and then lose composure the moment I tease her back. But maybe I just think that because my ideal girl is my character Ai-ch... never mind.

>Explorer Designation
>Industrial hull design
>Highlight color scheme, perhaps yellow with red highlights!
>I don't want any of those exterior features.
>Utilitarian inside design.
Of course I want that Alien Nostromo look, if possible. That's the good shit.
>Personal Suites: Green Space, Hobby Room, VIP Guest Room, Study.
>Personal Amenities: not enough honestly, but aquarium, wine cellar, water feature, and stellarscope.
>Relaxation wing: Pool Room, Observatory, Garden, Spa
>Entertainment Wing: Arcade, Club, Game Room
>Performance Wing: Cinema, duh, Theater, Sports Arena, Racetrack
>Thrill Wing: Re-enactments, Thrill Park, Water Park
>Collection Wing: Art Gallery, Library, Memorabilia, Trophy Room
>Consumption Rooms: Diner, BBQ, Gourmet, Cultural, Tours, Entourage, Courier, Event Planning; I don't need shops on my ship, I have everything I need elsewhere, honestly.

Exploration, now we're getting somewhere:
>VTOL, Civ Ship, Mech, Hover Bike; Exploration, Expeditions, Archeology, Camping; skipping wardrobe.

>Um... I don't really feel like going into every bit of minutia about what kinds of people or age or type or whatever of guests? Just imagine I grab whomever I feel like at this time, with one set of regular cabins and the VIP ones too.

Okay, the maiden voyage, that's fun:
>Mars and Sedna
>Liandi and Hadrian
>Sanctuary and Blossom Point
>Charter Station and Alkaid
>Port Serd and Neo-Aquilla
>Erithia and Dathon's Rest
>Igaria and Salmund
>Neo Terra and Emerald Bay

Off I go!

So, how's that cyoa you're making coming along?

Post Tok kino.

>>95918551
On page 5. Will be out... at some point.

>>95918565
At some point?

>>95918551
Progress slows, but I'm gonna be able to finish another page tomorrow I think.

>>95918565
If I keep going at my current pace, in a month maybe.

>>95918598
If I keep going at my current pace, in a month maybe.

Any cyoas where I can be a filth mage?

post your comfiest cyoa right now

>>95919546

>>95919124
Black Magic

>>95919124
Laboratorium

>>95919546
https://imgchest.com/p/na7konjjwy8

>banter with Anon about Italics
>another meltdown by matterfag faced with feminization
>refresh the thread, see that Get In Space, Losers! update is out
>nice
>go back to writing my Witcher build, I'll read it later
>wake up
>the whole thread never existed

Do you ever dream of things happening ITT, only to realize you hallucinated the whole thing?

>>95919894
Man, until the wake up part I thought I missed the Get in loser update.

And no, once I wake up I realize its a dream, while inside the dream sure, the majority of people have that "in a dream you can't realize its a dream even if its bizarre"

>>95919919
I just assume it was from a previous thread, and it wasn't linked properly because of yet another Biblefag/Create off-shot.

>>95919817
Ayano, Ono, Momo-dono, Koko-dono, Vuseba sexo

>>95918041
>OC by Foxpeng1
I unironically like this author better than Italics

Post Kino

>>95920425
>>95919817

>>95919817
If you make a new affinity do you auto gain g3 in it or something?

>>95918034 (OP)
>golden age of peace and prosperity in 2624
>Ship designation where you can recreate pedo island and get away with it
>Only the wealthy elite are allowed to live longer and not die of cancer
Instant vibe killer. I like my sci-fi without globopedo stank all over it.

>>95919124
Black magic lol

>>95918551
Terrible. The damn thing is longer than I remembered.

I demand Gil show himself

>>95920559
I doubt it. You wound gain g1, as you are starting.
We have to differentitate two Gs. The talent (genes) and the actual level.

Cyoa wise the player has both at the same time. But in universe people are not born with G1, G2 or G3, they are born with G0 and train, the limit being dictated by their genes.

If you created a new affinity, you would start at G1 as you are a novice learning and creating it and how far would be from your genes.

>>95919124
imagine impregnating a filth mage and she births some horrid abomination...

>>95920810
Yes, Gil here, what do you want.

>>95920908
Post kino.

>>95920913

>>95920938
This is not spirit conscript

Rise of the Dark Lord 2.0 when?

>>95920938
Why do you keep posting the older version are you actually fucking retarded or something holy shit

Cyoas with this feel?

>>95920896
or she shits throught her pussy.

>>95920985
>>95919817

>>95920975
he does it to piss (you) off

>>95918034 (OP)
Wait why do I need the explorer to go into uncharted space? If the space is unclaimed by anyone then who would stop or punish me if I go leave and explore or set up my own colony?

>>95920896
And that's why you don't stick it in a pajeet.

>>95920896
I imagine.

>>95921119
There’s over a billion out there anon. The odds are good there are exceptional ones that look gorgeous and have good genes.

>>95921142
I already tainted their good genes with mine.

>>95920985
Entropist
Isekai Dark Overlord
Rise of The Dark Lord
Dawn of A Demon Lord
Any self insert CYOAs that give you lots of power

>>95921179
British colonizer……

Why is some sussy baka trying to get editor access to my cyoa drive?

>>95921185
Spirit conscript. Basically the shonen animes (kino)
>>95921200
Sorry anon, its me. If you accept me I am going to delete everything. (who the heck is that?)

>>95921186
british colonizers would not taint genes, they would kill them.
I would be a spanish colonizer, and I am spanish so it matches.

>>95921238
Anon the British royals travelled all the way to India to bum Indian twinks and girls.

Cyoas I can show to my gf?

>>95921084
Scarier than any space pirate is space bureocracy. You wouldn't want your awesome yatch to be stuck at port because of a paper issue, would you?

>>95921332
https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/oo1725/take_your_pic_wholesome_girlfriend_edition/

>>95921332
I feel like the Great War series starting with Guardians by Scotsman is the ideal CYOA to introduce to the uninitiated.

>>95921332
Don’t. Just don’t.

Cyoas for this feel

>>95919894
>Dreaming about and talking about Italics
That's sus as fuck, bro.

>>95921457
Hey, its been a few months since I dreamed about him fucking me. That was weird as fuck

>>95921474
You didn't call it a nightmare.

>>95920968
Rise of the Light Lord when?

>>95921501
When pussies start raining, you pussy

>>95920985

>>95921598

>>95921608

>>95921615

>>95921332
Time Stop Chill Zone, most women are materialistic and abhor conflict yet adore luxury, therefore, the archetypal peaceful and comfy CYOA should be well-received.

>>95921681
>women abhor conflict
lol, lmao even. Perhaps even roflmao and perchance one person would dare say roflcopter

>>95921681
Women love being catty and bullying others behind their back.

>>95921814
>>95921822
You're both right. An addendum, women abhor physical conflict.

>>95918551
Any minute now

>>95921889
Today my negro?

>>95921889
Looks like a disgusting 3 pager.

How long is too long for a cyoa.

>>95921956
9 gazillion pages.

>>95921889
Looking good. I'm pretty hyped for it.

>>95921956
There is no upper limit. Keep in mind that the longer a CYOA gets, the more niche it will be, but the more dedicated its fanbase will be. JRPG Traitor is huge but gets posted and discussed almost a decade after its release. Relatively few one-pagers have a similar longevity.

>>95921889
So we get to grow up with the dark lord(female)?

>>95921996
Isn't that just a Dark Lady? Unless it's a pharoah situation, where by dint of the position, a woman in the seat is legally considered a man.

>>95921956
pic realted is pretty much the upper limit

>>95921860
Yep, they wouldn't understand say Spirit Conscript but the right Kingdom builder might tickle them.

>>95921956
No limit but long CYOAs get fewer builds posted. I mean I had a full Pantheon of Pleasure build figured out, but simply compiling the shopping list would have taken several hours, so it never got posted.

>>95921474
Well yea but cum doesn't actually taste like chocolate syrup, right?

>>95921889
this looks like bliss content
has HE returned to us?

>>95921956
Magi Case had over 30 pages and got 20 something builds. Spirit Conscript had like 1X something pages and got over 20 something builds. Size literally doesn't matter. What matters is how you present the CYOA and for people to enjoy the world and characters and powers.

>>95922245
>20 something builds
why must you blatantly lie to my face like this?

>>95921598
KINO. I still remember THAT build

>>95922245
Spriit Conscript didn't have 1X pages. Imagechest wise it has 61.

Long =/= anything except Long.

>>95922279
Both got more than 20 builds, these are confirmed facts. The main point I was making is that size of CYOAs are irrelevant. The main thing people care about in this general is the ability to make a build and engage with the world/setting.

We are more or less a more successful homebrew/worldbuilding/make your own game general.

>>95922279
Magi Case had at least 50 builds, and I think Spirit Conscript had more than 60.

The best spirit conscript waifu was in the pdf. Any build ignoring HER is ignoring the best waifu and potentially making HER an enemy, and she can't lose

>>95922053
N
Total lolikek death

>>95921956
Over 10

>>95921889
Huh. Good luck finishing it.
The visual presentation looks nice, a bit reminescent of nxtub's Destined for Greatness.

>>95922338
The true waifu experience is to take a waifu as a rival and lover, simultaneously. You'll get to know each other far better than as allies.

>>95922410
That looks like you want to hate fuck them.

>>95922451
A couple of them want to get hate fucked

>>95922451
The true mark of self-mastery is to move your passions, rather than be moved by your passions.

I would like Spirit Conscript more if the waifu options weren't all fetish fuel huge breasts images, because it completely threw me off, especially since the CYOA is heavily magical martial arts focused. I would personally liked more moderated art

>>95922516
I would like Spirit Conscript less if the waifu options weren't all fetish fuel huge breasts images, because it completely tickled my pickle, especially since the CYOA is heavily magical martial arts focused, imagine those bouncing!. I would personally liked bigger breasts.

>>95922502
Who?

>>95922516
My only complain with the waifu selection is that there isn't a four armed oni wife.

>>95922516
Yeah, it ruined my immersion. It reminded me of the horrible bimbo art you'd see in some of Tok's cyoas.

>>95922565
Yuxi (explicit masochist), and Rin (acts like a brat so you can correct her)

>>95918041
>>95920152
Comfy escapism CYOAs have fallen a bit by the wayside. It's nice to see someone still carrying the age-old torch.

>>95922516
Yeah, making it a titty cow compendium was a strange decision.

>>95922577
Yuxi would want a hate fuck but that is not hateful. She just wants to be loved and used, feel the thrill of maybe losing you but not losing you.
A proper hatefuck while would tickle her masochism it would sadden her as she doesn't want to be hated by you.

The same with Rin, she just wnats to be playful and get dominated

>>95922516
I liked the humongous tiddies, it was a nice change of pace from the washboard flat women in many others.

>>95922516
Almost entirely shit companions was a bad idea, yea.

I always kill the waifus in all the cyoas I play

>>95922649

>>95922516
For me? it's Yuxi, Rin, Rokubi, Yomi, Ming, and Mai.

>pedos still upset at PCA's impeccable taste

>>95922682

>>95921956
It depends on how autistic the cyoa is. Overlord is 97 pages, for example.

>>95922997
Despite making up 20% of the population, pedophiles make up 60% of whinefags in the /cyoag/.

>>95923147
Honestly probably closer to 80-90%

>>95920737
Highly homosexual post

>>95923147
>hagfag seething
Lol, lmao.

OC! Get your interactive isekai adventure here!
https://crimsonguy1.neocities.org/

>>95923147
lolifags take the obnoxiousness of waifufags and dial it to the max.
Total Pedo Death btw.

>>95923239
>interactive
No.

>so starved for content I'm considering playing tok cyoas
It's so over...

>>95923261
Just play arokino, there's more than enough for you.

>>95923264
I hope that one day she updates her master piece.
I would love to see her supervillain CYOA be expanded.

>>95923239
>difficulty options
>omnipotence is an actual choice
Lame.

>>95923213
>>95923247

>>95923261
D-dragonfall was kino....

>>95923239

>>95919894
I’m so sorry, dude. I swear Get in, Loser will be done by the end of this month. Page four is almost done. I’m at nearly 15,000 words.

>>95923239
the mortal difficulty option (is the OP "you are the strongest in the world" supposed to be the standard option?) gives you -25 power instead of 25

>>95923261
Start a cool multiplayer run like Entropist (I hate /mcyoag/)

>>95923291
It's not my fault you don't have the patrician taste to appreciate the aristocratic charm of lolis.

Reminder that magic the floppening FLOPPED

>>95923428
i think that's the point. you have to take a lot of drawbacks with mortal to get any powers

>>95923524
no, the description states that you gain 25 power
this is no different from all of the other stupid mistakes in the cyoa

>>95923524
oh, you're right. I checked if it had a negative sign (it didn't), but I didn't notice that it said "cost" instead of "gain."

>>95923524
Garbage

>>95923524
>>95923542
that's dumb

>>95923556
>>95923568
>choose the hardest difficulty
>complain when its hard
Very high IQ posters in here

Is Favored Soul supposed to be better than the other base classes? Why else pay wall it?

>>95923428
even the narrator is like lmao why'd you even pick this

>>95923507
TRUE and now he's taking ages hoping people will like an Avatar cyoa lmao

>>95923570
>all difficulties except for the hardest are so easy they're not even worth playing
>but the one hard difficulty alone is also made too hard
how dare people complain

>>95923390
Take your time, it's not like the thread will suddenly combust.

>>95923590
I cant remember if he said it was going to be avatar-like or literally Avatar

>>95923593

>>95923607

>>95923570
anon >>95923592 is right. The mortal difficulty gives you so few points that you just don't have options to take, but the next step up is literally "you are the strongest in the world," where Path to Victory is just one of your dozen powers.

>>95923617

>>95923239
Sometimes I lament the slowness of our thread but at least we haven't devolved into mass producing slop like this. When's reddit going to make a good CYOA for once?

>>95923664
Never. You vill conzume zee wurm zlop!

>>95923279
Ultimate God is currently being updated

>>95923700
And?

>>95923264
I like nexus gateway the most

>>95923448
Spirit Conscript and Entropist were the highlight of the general though full stop.

>>95923740
True. I enjoyed how both made other authors seethe

>>95923264
Same quality

>>95923754
Meanest thing you could possibly say.

>>95923740
I enjoyed how both authors seethed.

>>95923754
This is the reality.

>>95923740
I enjoyed how both made shitposters seethe.

>>95923756
Aro is basically a female tok.

>>95921956
You cannot make your CYOA too long, only too short.
For example, horse cocks are way to big for human women, but they admire and play with them anyways, while micropenises get no love at all from women.

>>95923786
Noted, will add horsecocks.

>>95923784
If you discount personality, gender, interests, approach to criticism, writing quality, mechanical skill, graphical quality, and overall cyoa quality, sure.

>>95923786
>For example, horse cocks-
Why is that your first example lmao

>>95923797
I hope she sees this bro. Make sure to tell it was you in the discord

>>95923806
She? I'm hating for tok, not simping for aro. Even Troyx is better than tok.

>>95923784
I thought Aro was a troon tho

>>95923797
All of that irrelevant compared to the real criteria - whether or not I like them.

>>95923833
No proof to that claim, so far.

>>95923247
>Total Pedo Death btw
based

>>95923852
It's a safer assumption than it being a real woman

>>95923247
Waifuchads are the sole reason the general still live.

>>95923247
I kneel.

>>95923873
You waifubetas are responsible for most of the obnoxious whining here and always have been.

>>95923852
Their writing style is very masculine, thobeit

>>95923904
Graphology isn't real.

>>95923239
>difficulty
Mortal
>race
Male Slime
I'm going to assume slimes are ageless
>skills
Appraise, Alchemy, Sorcerer

since magic is said to be common in setting, I'm assuming you don't need to take a 'magic' option to use that magic. The magic options are completely unaffordable on the mortal difficulty.
>perks
Learning Mastery, Thought Acceleration
>drawbacks
group, socially inept, lone wolf , promised, lightweight, resting smug face , noble taste, slow start, royal pet , interracial whore

I'm hateable, but I get guaranteed companions so it shouldn't be a big deal. I start weak, but I'm guarded by the princess who summoned me.
>world
Friendly Fauna, Villages , Quests
>companions
YoRHa Unit 2B (Codename: 2B), Raven
>quests
First Steps with Luna, Roots of Remedy, Patrol Partners, The Unbroken Blade, Bound by Duty, The Arcane Trial

I'm put to work by the mother of the princess who summoned me. She gives me a royal title and betroths me to her daughter while cucking her.
>items
Dimensional storage, Compass, Mantle of Intelligence, Treasure Map, Rabadon's Deathcap
>vows
Solo, Big Brain , Cursed, Noble Title, Exhibitionism, Breeding, Pass Along Knowledge

>>95923890
>spirit kino is carried by waifus and powers
>entropist is carried by waifus and powers
>danmachi is carried by waifus and powers
You're the one infesting OUR general, moralkek.

>>95923916
Ludicrous, you might as well argue forehead structure has no bearing on capacity for empathy.

>>95923923
>waifus
>and powers
You should have stopped at Spirit Conscript.

>>95923916
he has a troon vibe tho

>>95923956
True, tok does give off very strong troon energies

>>95919569
Rain Remedy. I've always wanted to read everything in a library. To spend years or decades focusing specifically on a single subject. Then to pick another and do it all over again. One week loops also give you enough time to travel the world, to connect with new people, and to really enjoy different experiences. Would be a great time all around
>but immortality is bad and you'll want to die
This is a cozy cyoa so I'm sure I'll maintain my optimism over the millennia.

>>95923239
>Difficulty
>Mortal
Ok, let's do this.

My sides still haven't recovered from learning Cthulhu powerscaling is the source material for Ultimate God. It explains everything perfectly.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ppk2Q-fbkX8&t=1577s

>>95923956
Troonmage's Ultimate Troon update when?

>>95924040
Apparently timestamps don't work for embeds, it's at 26:17 when Aromage is mentioned.

>>95924040
DBZspic...

>>95923239
>Open the cyoa
>Go to power section
>Haki
>Close cyoa

>>95924077
AND the companion section is just the actual characters too. I hate redicords so much. Always so close to making something good but they just CAN'T RESIST copy pasting 20000 fictional series into their cyoa.

>>95923239
>half of the options are of sexual nature
And just like that I'm out.

>>95923921
>Sorcerer
>since magic is said to be common in setting, I'm assuming you don't need to take a 'magic' option to use that magic. The magic options are completely unaffordable on the mortal difficulty.
I've got no idea what the author meant by this. It says in the Sorcerer desc that you're a learned spellcaster capable of "destructive elemental spells to intricate illusions and powerful enchantments"
Then why offer all of these things separately for greater cost??

Do we have an automated tool for cyoa creation, or ready made templates, available for easy OC?

>>95924113
IMO, the only sensible assumption is that the magic section is godly talent in the field or something, and not required to learn that branch of magic.

>>95923784
>>95923817
>>95923833
If I had to bet I would say Troon, because "she" is obviously a bit woke but doesn't hate on male sexuality the way an actual woke femanon would.

>>95924125
https://quantencomputer.github.io/cyoastudio/
Or use the HTML template inside the AllSync if you know your way around code.

>>95924125
I don't know if this is exactly what you're talking about, but there are tools specifically for cyoa making:
https://hikawasisters.neocities.org/ICCPlus/
https://quantencomputer.github.io/cyoastudio/

>>95923239
>User has the ability to put enchantments on something/someone; a type of spell that has power over others to alter/enhance the properties (magical, mundane, etc,) of things using magic from people, objects, or even spells by manipulating certain means of magic to permanently/temporarily endow any kind of quality, ability, asset, etc, to others or themselves to accomplish their goals which can come in a variety of spells from illusions, shapeshifting, bestowals and so on.
Enchanting sounds OP as shit

>>95924245
The entire cyoa is hilarously imbalanced, just take a 50 point option and you win everything forever.

How do I kill Orsted using the Mushoku Tensei cyoa?
How do I kill Ottar using the Danmachi cyoa?
How do I kill Dumbledore using the Harry Potter cyoa?

>>95924151
At the same time she doesn't seem to understand the "male fantasy" in the way that should intuitively come to any man, even or especially if he's a troon. Same reason that I think that OutrageousBears is a real woman.

>>95924262
1. Nuke
2. Nuke
3. Nuke

>>95924276
What's the "male fantasy"? Having heaps of women throwing themselves at your feet while overpowering everyone else?

>>95923239
>>95924015
>Difficulty:
Mortal

>Race:
Elf

>Skills and Abilities:
Alchemy, Druid, Sorcerer, Mindshifting

>Perks:
Strong Lifeforce

>Drawbacks:
Missing Limb, Infertile, Ugly Bastard , Promised, Noble Taste, Hunting Party, Slow Start, Battlefield, Buckets of Cum

>Starting Location:
Scalix

>Rules:
Friendly Fauna, Creation, Magic Surge, Peaceful Era

>Creation:
Race: Elf
Skills and Abilities: Alchemy, Druid, Sorcerer, Mindshifting
Perks: Strong Lifeforce

My (loyal) clone who doesn't have my drawbacks.

>Mythic Shop:
Resurrection Potion, Trinity Force, Rabadon's Deathcap, Hermes Boots

>Vows:
Gangbang, Reverse Gangbang, Beast Lover, Royal Fucker, Robin Hood, Monster Hunter, Exhibitionism, Breeding, Looks Female Enough

>>95924276
Hmm, that is a good point. That mutilated corpse-puppet masquerading as a Witch Awakening remake was a uniquely feminine dystopia.

>>95924282
But where is a Hogwarts student going to find a nuke? Even worse for Danmachi delver and MK adventurer, as they don't have access to Earth's tech.

>>95924305
fake: the clone is a fake
gay: 'female enough'

>>95924276
Yea that's true too. Aro feels a bit off in some way.

>>95924303
>t. clueless woman

>>95924303
Yea basically. Look at Spirit Conscript.

>>95923239
>https://crimsonguy1.neocities.org/
What is the best Legendary power for a Mortal, 20p max, (unless there is another way to get powers points Mortal can only reach +24 with drawbacks) ?

>>95924316
By nuke I mean overwhelming force. Any kind of force.

>>95924340
This would be so much better if there was only one or two difficulty settings. Why are interactive always like this?

>>95924332
Genuinely, what is it? There's no single one.

>>95924336
>Look at Spirit Conscript.
No thanks. The setting bore me, the waifus are shit, the powers are complicated, and I dislike the cultivation aspect.

>>95924303
My male fantasy is becoming financially independent and quitting the job I hate. No more commutes, no more ass kissing, no more sore back from sitting in a terrible chair all day. No more stress and anxiety about the never ending bills and costs of living in a society.
Cute waifu optional, adorable pet companion mandatory. Wide open country, unbound nature, yet unrealistic in that everything is idealized and there is none of the brutal hardships faced in that sort of reality.

>>95924386
Fake and gay

>>95924340
No legendary unless you have 24 or more points (you would have to take some unacceptable drawbacks, I think, to get that many). Strong Lifeforce is mandatory.

>>95924316
Literally just go
>acio nuke

>>95924372
>The setting bore me
The best part
>the powers are complicated
dumb?
>I dislike the cultivation aspect
There is no cultivation. Unless you seriously think that growing your "mana" is equal to cultivation. Or that meditation = cultivation.

You had 1 opinion, and even if opinons are hard to fuck up because they depend of being subjetive you somehow made your opinion shit.

Spirit Conscript setting makes no sense and the worldbuilding is ass.

>>95924393
I'm a manly man. I have a beard and everything. I ooze so much testosterone that I even have a receding hairline.
That last one actually hurts. A lot. The beard is for when I eventually decide to shave off the top.

>>95924398
Perhaps. I get bored easily when confronted with things like the * system in Entropist or the token mechanic of JRPG Traitor.

What really matters in life and CYOAs is being happy.
You're happy, right?

>>95924362
Talk about moving the goal post. The "male fantasy" isn't a single thing but every straight male knows what it is and every straight women seems to hate it. Which is why Aro is so odd. She doesn't get it, but doesn't truly hate it either. She has genuinely tried to make good waifus for example, but they don't ever seem to hit the mark. High libido lesbian perhaps?

>>95924428
> with things like the * system in Entropist
Where? Do you seriously think that the unit being * makes it bad? The problem of Entropist is it was hard to read and unnecesesary. As instead of 10 souls it was **** for example and 1000 souls was ******.

>or the token mechanic of JRPG Traitor.
And the problem of the token system was being like 6 different units to buy things.

In spirit conscript there is two, points to buy equipetment and points to buy the rest.

It can't be made much more easy without making it be a 2+2.

>>95924455
>The problem of Entropist is it was hard to read and unnecesesary. As instead of 10 souls it was **** for example and 1000 souls was ******.
Nta but you just stated why its bad. Both examples are needlessly complicated.

>>95924428
In other words, you're retarded. Sad!

>>95924446
>The "male fantasy" isn't a single thing but every straight male knows what it is and every straight women seems to hate it.
This is entering "divine feminine energy" levels of delusion.

>>95924446
>She doesn't get it, but doesn't truly hate it either.
Do you have any examples?

>>95924466
Nta but he could've just used 10^x and it would've been perfectly fine. It's a legibility issue.

>>95924446
Do you mean it's the general tendencies of fantasies rather than a specific archetype?

>>95924485
Fair pont. There's a lots of things he could have done to fix the half baked mess that 2.0 was

>>95924469
Sure. Why not.

>>95924455
Ah, beyond the (* = 1/100 soul) equation, there was also the twin build issue for me, as you were building your current build, but also had to keep in mind how it worked fully realized with the Max Potential.
Perhaps on its own it would've been fine, but coupled with the * system it sapped my motivation to even try.

My male fantasy is to live long enough to see another one of Scottishanon's masterpieces.

>>95924303
Ask yourself what Tok, Softie and (You) have in common.

>>95924482
As I said her companions are the best example. Her CYOAs always have multiple attractive sexually receptive female companions but they don't match what a male author would write. I really would expect a female author to be indifferent at best to this, but more likely to hate on waifu's as objectifying women.

>>95924539
>tok, softie, and that anon
Bottoming for stronger men

>>95924539
...We like to daydream?

>>95924494
Yea you could say that. Also the biggest mistake women seem to make about it isn't "what" the fantasy is by "why".

>>95924547
I think you might have a very singular view of women that doesn't account for the wildly varying personalities of the individual, especially while anonymous on the internet, anon. Much of female hate towards male interests is caused by the fear of ostracization by fellow females in their circle; it's why more and more vtubers are being known as pro-male 'pickmes'

How important is setting to your power fantasy? Specifically, the scale.

All of the cool shit in Spirit Conscript being limited to a single city felt like such a waste, and Entropist and Ultimate God's multiverse nonsense killed any fun I had. Is the ideal scale for a cyoa closely related to its power level?

>>95921332
Cat Break is one of the few I've shown her. She loved it of course.

>>95924573
Kinda. Outer Reincarnation wouldn't have worked if it was contained in a single city, and linking it to Blood Mage-Convention war would've lessen the importance of the story.

>>95924466
Spirit Conscript its not. The star its just how aura is called. There is nothing to do or calculate with it

>>95924569
Every women I have ever met has essentially the same personality. I don't buy the hivemind stuff but it's been pretty eerie. If you know where to find some that are attracted to weirdos let me know.

>>95924386
the thing that's actually causing you misery is the erosion of leverage of workers.
Commuting is probably unnecessary for a desk job, but they make you do it because they can.
ass kissing isn't necessary to do your job, but they make you do it because they can.
a better chair would be cheap, but they don't do it because your misery has no consequence for them.
Cost of living is an exception, but having affordable housing without structural changes would require you to beat other people. You can't all have affordable housing without structural changes (less immigration, more construction). These bad structural decision are also completely unnecessary choices, but not related to worker leverage.

Your male fantasy is lower immigration, more housing/infrastructure construction, and better competition policy (and enforcement).

>>95924573
>or the token mechanic of JRPG Traitor.
Its called the city but there was more than the city, the wilds, the sea, the spirit world etc...
And if you wanted to be able to do everthing like normal in our world then Age of truth makes it possible.

>>95924642
I was referring to JRPGT.

>>95924569
>Much of female hate towards male interests is caused by the fear of ostracization by fellow females in their circle
What does this mean? Why would they turn on each other?

>>95924662
Nobody hates women more than other women, anon. This is an important lesson you must learn.

>>95924653
A union might help too.

>>95924569
Vtubers are professional "I am not like other girls" actors.

>>95924665
The second lesson is that women are never happy with they have, and if given the thing that they say they want they immediately want the opposite.

>>95924679
Anon doesn't want to admit it

>>95924653
>not related to worker leverage.
let me refine this. They cause an erosion of worker leverage, where the other stuff are consequences of eroded worker leverage.

For example: if we built enough housing for all the immigration, then a lot of people would need to be hired to do that construction work, which would give workers more leverage (through supply and demand).

>>95924547
What's the cyoa that represents this best? I want to see if you're right

>>95924653
>having affordable housing without structural changes would require you to beat other people
Factually false. Most real estate and apartments are empty right now. Houses and homes are sold off from the elderly to cover medical expenses and one of the largest owners of homes are the investment firms funding end-of-life care and nursing/retirement homes.
In the cities you have a majority of property, apartments, condos, etc, owned by similar groups of investment companies. It isn't unusual for each to own tens of thousands of homes in each city they have a stake in, with a majority entirely empty and unlisted to prevent the decline in rental prices.

>>95924696
Nexus Gateway is a decent example of what I am talking about. Honestly I feel Aro has really good potential if only we could get her to realize the flaws inherent to Reddit feedback.

>>95924700
The city I live in has one guy owning a lot of property. Most people here fucking hate him.

>>95924688
Yea I know anon. I was hoping to trigger a Poltard. IMO we need to deport the beaners (scabs) AND improve workers rights.

>>95924720
How would a male author write them?

>>95924762
I am not an author anon so I don't know what the writing process is like, but I can tell you it's different. I can say the image selection is obviously different too. The male gaze comes into play for sure but we can't even really tell what Star-Jin Long looks like.

>>95924762
Muscle chick is ugly as fuck. Star can be mistaken a man. Chrona on the right semi-looks like a tok bimbo slut.

>>95924762
>>95924845
In particular muscle mommy's face is lacking detail and is too stylized.

>>95924829
>>95924845
>>95924865
This is just image selection. I want to know how they would be written differently.

>>95924762
I would make at least one of them a masochist, desu

>>95924905
>Tok-tier writing choice

>>95924845
>>95924915
>TOK TOK TOK TOK TOK
Grim.

>>95924871
One thing I can think of is Chrona would have been written more overtly nerdy/geeky to align with her power set and wouldn't be a MILF archetype.

Which cyoa has a waifu selection that appeals the most to the male fantasy?

>>95924957
Entropist. You know this to be true.

>>95924957
Spirit Conscript, obviously

>>95924957
Luminary they offer both sex and power

>>95924957
Arch Demon Roommate (and it's two sequels/spinoffs) might be a good set to look at.

>>95924957
Anything not made by italics, aro, or tok.

>>95925028
You could add practically every author to this list.

If you had to give one author infinite wishes, which would you pick? Which would fuck up the world the least?

>>95924952
Contrast her to Mai in Spirit Conscript and you will also notice that when men want a more mature women they like it to come with social upsides (just like women do). Mai has a very high ranking position in the court of Youdu.

>>95924959
Gifts are the only reason anons pretend its a 10/10 cyoa so I agree with this completely.

>>95925049
Me.

>>95925049
I don't know who but I know for a fact it wouldn't be degenerate Tok or racist Entropist.

>>95925050
It's called not merely wanting a piece of nice looking meat. A matter of course.
>WHAT DO YOU BRING TO THE TABLE?

>>95925049
Entropistanon. I am sure he would get rid of all the indians.

AI-slopist will never be kino.

>>95925068
Chrona brings a lot to the table, just not what we expect the big boob MILF to. Honestly I got a serious thing for evil queens.

>>95924845
>Muscle chick is ugly
Ramia-Yana would not be a very popular webcomic if this were true, you just have shit taste.

>>95925087
Never heard of ramwhateverthefuck.

>>95925087
>aro is trying to defend her choices
You can't.

Remember the anon in the last thread insisting that Aro "knows her audience"? Kek.

>>95924905
Baphomet is a masochist

>>95925121
Considering her audience is mainly redditcord simps who will just yes man her, she knows it pretty well.

>>95925128
Damn. It's not often I conceed.

>>95925128
Aromage is what tok dreams he could one day be.

>>95925165
A woman?

>>95925171
Yes

Cyoa where I can bomb the middle east?

>>95925206
Entropist

>>95925206
they made one in 2024, but the next one isn't coming out until 2028.

>>95925211
Sadly no. That cyoa had a lot of things but was greatly lacking in sci-fi tech.

>>95925213
the 2024 one kind of sucked. It had an option to not bomb the middle east, but if you picked it then the results page would bomb the middle east anyway.

>>95925206
that one jewish hog cyoa excelanon made
whatever happened to excelanon anyways? he dieded?

>>95925261

>>95924303
>>95924494
Using X to solve Y. Instrumental thinking. The interest in an end that demands the means presented to you, and how those means differ from each other. We'll say that the failure to cater to understand this psychology is the Female Author Disease (FAD).

For one of the worst cases of this, I'm going to start with Zephyr. Zephyr focuses on things to protect you from antagonists that it doesn't have, the Empire, Republic, Kingdom, et cetera all just exist without designs on the other nations. They don't even have different aesthetics or values. Your allegiance means nothing here.

Another one is Beneath the Waves, where the antagonist is never mentioned after the intro, and all major conflicts are just vague political tensions.

In the last case there's Haven. Haven is supposed to be post-apocalyptic, but any investments in a strong or safe settlement will be punished by the CYOA itself because they consume points without counting towards a better ending, it plays a joke on you for trying to care about protecting yourself from the poorly defined "Dark".

>>95918034 (OP)
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>>95925288
nice shopping list build, really loved the part where you explained your choices

>>95925282
So it's being able to SOLVE cyoas?

>>95925326
What is there to explain. It's a comfy cyoa.

>>95924762
No clue. I ran it through some AI chatbots a few times asking to write it with a masculine tone and in a way that encapsulates the male fantasy. It doesn't look like it changed much though.

>>95925346
You won't get a good rating that way kek

>>95925471
>Chatbots couldn't fix it
Color me shocked zoomie

>>95925471
Image is an improvement, not great but better

>>95925479
Only females care about the opinions of others.

>>95925494
Thanks. I looked for muscular women and abs and went with the first one I thought was cute. I don't really get muscle women but it looks like there's quite a few body types mashed together under the tag. From cardio bunnies to toned women in general to brick shit houses. Must be tough having that kink.

>>95925327
NTA but it's having a challenge and a set of specific tools to solve it. It's how IRL men were able to solve this
https://youtu.be/ry55--J4_VQ?si=v9FGnX-tSBCDK563

>>95925471
IMO the character can't be "fixed" because of its inherent qualities, she has no classic feminine traits or inherent flaws in her character, that's how a man would have writen her.

>>95925521
Could you give me examples of CYOAs fitting that male fantasy? I thought about Outer Reincarnation with its companions an perks, but in retrospect the depth of 0^0's control isn't explained.

>>95925494
no its actually substantially worse. far Lower detail, not as striking, and communicates far less personality. it would look completely out of place next to the other options in the cyoa.

>>95924665
>>95924686
The sad thing is I feel like men and women would get along a much better if boys were told that people find it annoying when you tug their hair for attention, and girls were told that you don't have to dedicate every moment of your existence to being the popular kid.

>>95925471
Noi could be good.

>>95925527
the art is also terrible, and troons are notoriously oblivious to their offputting and creepy sense of taste

>>95925514
>it looks like there's quite a few body types mashed together under the tag.
Tav is a powerful demigod protector of her people so a male author would have likely coded her a bit more Wonderwomen like.

>>95925494
liking either makes you an actual homosexual

>>95925543
Well yea Aros whole art style ought to change.

>>95925539
Most of them. What you aren't getting is that men see EVERYTHING as a problem to be fixed. For a specific example the recent Dark Lord CYOA is a good example. The problem is your task of conquering the world for your benefactor, and your tools are the specific army you build.

>>95925527
Nah. No flaws and no feminine traits is how a feminist writes

>>95925282
>>95925521
And that's part of why Nexus Gateway isn't very good. The implicit problem (beating Ivory) isn't solvable. It's impossible to become strong enough to face her head on and while the CYOA focuses heavily on the idea of building an army, an army couldn't beat her either. No amount of Roman Legionaries could beat Superman for example. Granted if it was better executed Aro could have used her feminine perspective to create interesting diplomatic options outside of the normal male perspective. But as is, befriending or staying neutral with Irovy is an extreme but necessarily inconvenience.

>>95925612
Can confirm. It's why therapy doesn't work for most guys. Talking about a problem doesn't fix a problem. You have to be able to quantify it and physically take steps to fix it. And that's just not possible with intangible concepts like emotions, experiences, and trauma, for most dudes.

>>95925756
Yea it's also why (in Burger land at least) left wing politics is losing men to the right. I don't like guys like Andrew Tate but he treats men's issues as solvable issues and gives concrete ideas for moving towards a solution.

>>95925754
That's what I meant: a man would have written her with flaws, problems to deal with and feminine traits.

What's with all the anti-Italics posting as of late?

What's with all the anti-spirit chadscript posting as of late?

What's with all the Bandersnatch shilling, of late?

What's with all the meta questions as of late?

What's with all the Jabberwocky erasure as of late?

What's with all the aro shilling, as of late? But like really. This thread is filled with it.

>>95925987
>Looks at discussion and actual criticism
>Calls it shilling

Hus stole the name Kleidi from Aro!

>>95924957
Entropist, not only each waifu have obvious archetype, each of them then fill a specific role in your team. each of them then also have their own unique overpower ability that would be too overpower on our hand.
plus [Ascension: Divine Promotion] let us give them a little more powers from what we purchased, making us think a bit more about each of them.

i also really like that you use unique currency to buy them, which balancing it even more.

I have an idea for a CYOA, but I don't know if it's good enough.

>>95925539
Outer Reincarnation is actually a good example of that. All of its characters and locations are defined by at least one of the three driving tensions of O.R. which is; first the self-appointed mission of the gods to guide people out of reincarnation, second the changes inflicted by Outsiders on the world, third the war of the Ecumene against the gods and their worshippers. And characters aren't just "participants in this conflict", they all have goals, values, or beliefs that are crucial to their personalities, informing the goals that they want you working towards.
You'll notice that such things aren't present in >>95924762 or the rest of Nexus Gateway, where NPC personalities are based on what they /feel/, not what they /want/ or /believe/.

>>95926079
Ask yourself if you'd rather play a CYOA based on your idea or a Tok CYOA. If you'd prefer your idea, it's good enough.

>>95926062
It was the other way around.

>>95926102
Holy shit, you spelled out exactly why I felt dislike toward aro's companions but couldn't put into words.

>>95926207
>Holy shit, you spelled out exactly why I felt dislike toward aro's companions
Italics too.

>>95920938
>Black magic CYOA
>”Oh yes perfidious profaner, if you hanmmer iron nails into your penis while dancing counter-clockwise every Thursday, in three years you’ll gain the power to give people tummy aches…AT THE COST OF YOUR ETERNAL SOUL! Also you go bald”

>christian CYOA
>”Here’s a superpower, an artifact and a friend my child, have fun!”

>>95925791
Would Cataclysmic Cultivation be considered the best recent example of this then? The companions all have that.

>>95926102
>Ouk
Isn't this a pretty good option? For yourself, I mean.

>>95926572
Wrong death slot, iirc yours is A.

>>95926396
I haven't read it as it is incomplete

You're satisfied with the progress you've been making on your oc, right anon?

>>95926615
Yes but i am making slow progress but at least its progress.

>>95924762
Depends on the author obviously?

>>95926076
The only cyoa I've played where I considered giving away power for extra waifus. I just wish it had fewer evil women.

>>95926862
>I just wish it had fewer evil women.
Why are you gay?

>>95926980
>I like evil women
Why are you hetero?

>>95926980
maybe he likes men?

I still don't know what is going on inouter reincarnation. There's a previous isekai protagonist that overthrew the gods, but i feel there's a lot more to it from the blurbs I've read of the cyoa

>>95927296
Its ok to be a readlet anon, there's no shame in that. My advice is to play brainlet-friendly cyoas like Entropist, Danmachi and Dragonfall.

>>95927308
how about... fuck you! I hate danmachi

>>95927536
>hates danmachi
>but not dragonfall or entropist
Interesting.

>>95927556
Dragonfall is much faster than Danmachi and Entropist can freeze his opponents.

>>95927556
Hating Danmachi is derived of the guy spamming it and making artificial discussion of "who can beat X" or "Bell molested" nobody cares.
That guy has been annoying more time than any fan of entropist, dragonfall, spirit conscript etc... together. As those cyoas at least had natural discussion and the fans are trying to prolong it, the danmachi guy just uses it to be annoying.

If you hate Entropist or Dragonfall you have a problem, you can dislike them but hating is a strong word.

>>95926615
Loli marriage? what does she have in her armband?

>>95925575
better than generic anime art.

>>95927596
reddit meme

despite my chagrin

>>95928259
>>95928259
>>95928259

I am still just a pig in a pen

>>95923239
>Male companions
>All faggoty looking femboys
It's just so tiresome.