Ask me about my TTRPG system + setting
It's in the early stages of development (srsly unfinished) so I'd like some feedback since I'm new to this thing.
Doc:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IPZiH4p0SF9X0uCerkj5wKBSod7dJKAWA4yB0VJShjA/edit?usp=sharing
Lore: https://astraplex.miraheze.org/wiki/Main_Page

My initial opinion for the overview is that it leans too heavy into specific points of spectacle instead of an overarching unified vibe. You've got a bunch of ingredients but no cohesive meal.

I get you're going for early 00s deviantart forum roleplay chuunibyou vibe. At the moment, there's no vibe unifier. There's no "bass note". There's nothing evocative to latch onto to make me think "yeah this is a good early 00s cringe chuuni forum roleplay setting" rather than just it being a couple barebones ideas with some 00s chuuni window dressing draped on top.

Part of that I think would necessarily have to include writing up some more compelling fiction or setting or metaplot to the thing to give some vision for what you actually do in the game and what the intended vibe is.

Consider the VN "Class of '09'. It captures the 00s vibe perfectly.

Consider old white wolf games/jenna moran games and how they put in some metaplot and some fiction to communicate the vibe and hook you in.

At the moment there's not really anything to ask questions about and nothing to latch onto. But I am a sucker for 00s nostalgia bait so if you can find some way to get a vision for a cohesive full vibe of it then I could possibly get on board.

>>96136902
>Consider the VN "Class of '09'. It captures the 00s vibe perfectly.
It doesn't have uncensored rape scenes.

>>96136256 (OP)
I don't care what your system/setting is. Can I play a fallout ghoul with a robot maid/butler?

>>96136256 (OP)
Do you have a group to play it with