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Anonymous No.279688035 [Report] >>279688802 >>279688976 >>279693563
Otr of the Flame chapter 6
Village of the Mist
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The plot is finally moving forward
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Anonymous No.279688584 [Report]
>>279688470
>>279688544
A lot of leg focus
Anonymous No.279688633 [Report] >>279690373
I tried to download double page, but it doesn't work for me, sadly.
Anonymous No.279688672 [Report] >>279698487
>>279688544
>Ice skates as weapons in viking manga
This shit is so fucking lame
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Fin, what do you think of this latest chapter so far?
Anonymous No.279688696 [Report]
>>279688677
A good chapter. They finally left for adventures, there was some worldbuilding, some showcase of power from the main girl(?) and the plot is moving. Hopefully it'll continue like this
Thanks for the dump
Anonymous No.279688765 [Report] >>279693095
>>279688677
Thank GOD he skipped the training and moved onto the plot. Very good chapter we need more like this.
Anonymous No.279688771 [Report] >>279693095
>>279688677
Previous chapters being exposition dumps made them a slog to go through. This one's moving in the right direction
Anonymous No.279688785 [Report]
>>279688438
>>279688470
Pretty sick design. I like that his bones are still there but his leg is made of ice.
Anonymous No.279688802 [Report] >>279688842
>>279688035 (OP)
What's this about? Is it good?
Anonymous No.279688803 [Report] >>279689693
>>279688040
oh good, people can stop crying about not leaving the mountain now
Anonymous No.279688807 [Report] >>279688851
The pacing got really fast but at least the author managed to wrap up the training, move the story to a new location and introduce the first proper villain all in one go.
Anonymous No.279688842 [Report]
>>279688802
Vikings fighting ice demons. It's alright so far.
Anonymous No.279688851 [Report]
>>279688807
I wouldn't say it was fast, it was uneven
Anonymous No.279688866 [Report]
>>279688405
Cute
Anonymous No.279688918 [Report] >>279689693
>>279688040
There they finished training, are you happy /a/
Anonymous No.279688926 [Report]
>>279688438
Straight to Adolf
Anonymous No.279688932 [Report] >>279693095
>>279688677
It's great. Training finished, plot moving, new fight started. You can feel the guy's Red Hood ptsd.
Anonymous No.279688951 [Report]
>>279688438
>ice guy
>called Adolf
well now I gotta post it
Anonymous No.279688970 [Report] >>279689081
>>279688677
stitch spreads together dingus
Anonymous No.279688976 [Report] >>279691774
>>279688035 (OP)
>>279688405
God, I love hebes.
Anonymous No.279689074 [Report]
>>279688544
Hikaru...are you?
Anonymous No.279689081 [Report]
>>279688970
To be fair, I used hakuneko app to download this.
Anonymous No.279689107 [Report] >>279689298 >>279691062
>>279688105
lol what?? why ice kingdom is just close nearby??? and where is the kingdom on your own king???

A-X-E?????
Anonymous No.279689170 [Report]
>>279688105
So the training arc was a party members intro all along.
Anonymous No.279689183 [Report]
i'm ngl this is looking bad
the characters are all whatever and none of them are particularly interesting
Anonymous No.279689257 [Report] >>279689330
>>279688183
>we're the same age right
For some reason I keep thinking she's a lolibaba until I get reminded
Anonymous No.279689298 [Report] >>279691347
>>279689107
Makes sense considering the inversions going on.
Anonymous No.279689330 [Report]
>>279689257
I thought it was obvious since she was an apprentice
Anonymous No.279689362 [Report] >>279693095
>>279688677
I'm glad it skipped the rest of the training and we're finally dealing with more ice faggots
Anonymous No.279689498 [Report] >>279690347 >>279690373
>>279688677
I kind of think that this author is fond of Axes as weapons, which is based, we need more axe users in manga
Anonymous No.279689541 [Report] >>279689757 >>279689925
I feel like he should have had another chapter to build up the ice guy instead of cutting straight to a fight and having his leg broken after 2 pages of screentime
Anonymous No.279689693 [Report]
>>279688803
>>279688918
well, you are dumb, if not worry about that progression
Anonymous No.279689757 [Report] >>279689817
>>279689541
He's the first evil army representative, those guys die in ten pages in half the mangas.
Anonymous No.279689795 [Report] >>279693095
>>279688677
It's finally on a good direction.
Anonymous No.279689817 [Report]
>>279689757
he's the second evil army representative
Anonymous No.279689925 [Report] >>279689979 >>279689996 >>279690013
>>279689541
This guy literally just exists to show off the training results+let the new girl showboat a little. He was never gonna be a major fight.
Anonymous No.279689979 [Report]
>>279689925
You would think pushing through a major pass would have a higher level guy around for it though wouldn't you.
I'm actually wondering if ice is only going to be the first arc and it will move onto higher scale conflicts after this
Anonymous No.279689996 [Report]
>>279689925
The problem is that he is the second one.
Anonymous No.279690013 [Report] >>279690219
>>279689925
He might get the upper hand before Sixten comes back and flattens him
Anonymous No.279690117 [Report]
>>279688069
Big shrimp
Anonymous No.279690145 [Report]
>>279688069
>shrimp
kek
Anonymous No.279690160 [Report]
>>279688105
dwarf valley? so next is dwarf spirit user?? i guess water. cos i cant make it out what race represent it with in chap 1.
Anonymous No.279690219 [Report]
>>279690013
he will not come around in ten days. those 2 should win easily.
Anonymous No.279690274 [Report]
>>279688544
He really did add a Shina to this series, nice
Anonymous No.279690325 [Report] >>279693095
>>279688677
this should've been chapter 3, he jas strenght but no refining and sixten and the loli appear to teach him to be better
Anonymous No.279690332 [Report] >>279690718 >>279691766
I'm a little shocked at how boring this turned out. Like I'm genuinely less impressed with it then I was Red Hood. There's some really boring personalities on display and the world itself doesn't feel very interesting either. This author seems a little too obsessed with making an RPG adventure type manga.
Anonymous No.279690347 [Report] >>279690448
>>279689498
Axes you say?
Anonymous No.279690373 [Report] >>279690757
>>279688633
>>279688677
>Double check
Thx mate.
>>279689498
Axes are the defacto weapons in viking settings. So it makes sense.
Anonymous No.279690448 [Report]
>>279690347
axe'd dead gill...
Anonymous No.279690718 [Report] >>279691766
>>279690332
I think there's nothing interesting so far, nor the bland characters or the dull story
At least we already scaped the training arc but he should do something about those other things
Anonymous No.279690757 [Report] >>279690969 >>279691066
>>279690373
Thanks for the spreads, anon! What program do you for this?
Anonymous No.279690969 [Report] >>279691260
>>279690757
Photoshop. Just copy and paste the pages next to each other.
Anonymous No.279691004 [Report]
the bad guy is a little too over the top and stupid
guy learned only the worst lessons from being matsui's assistant
Anonymous No.279691062 [Report] >>279691347
>>279689107
>why ice kingdom is just close nearby???
The kingdom is not just a single city but a nation that's expanding its borders by invading its neighbors. Its borders probably used to be much further away because otherwise this village would have already been invaded a long time ago since it's basically right next door.
Anonymous No.279691066 [Report] >>279691260
>>279690757
You can just Google combine images online that's what I do for these dumps, zero time invested.
Anonymous No.279691221 [Report] >>279693095
>>279688677
FINALLY, A GOOD CHAPTER
This should've been CHAPTER 3 or 4
Anonymous No.279691260 [Report] >>279691299
>>279690969
>Photoshop
Easier said than done.
>>279691066
But how? I tried that on before but no avail.
Anonymous No.279691299 [Report] >>279691355
>>279691260
As easy as it gets
https://www.imgonline.com.ua/eng/combine-two-images-into-one.php
Anonymous No.279691302 [Report]
>>279688511
>>279688544
Axe defeated
Anonymous No.279691347 [Report] >>279691676 >>279696356
>>279689298
>>279691062
then why they dont retreat or going to ALLY Kingdom, did they really expect 2 kids and 1 hero can do it???
Anonymous No.279691355 [Report] >>279691420 >>279700337
>>279691299
Holy shit, work like a charm, thank you so much for this anon!
Anonymous No.279691402 [Report]
I'm happy the wrapped up the training but he really can't write adventures. He made a half-chapter adventure ffs
Anonymous No.279691420 [Report]
>>279691355
Told you, I'm really lazy.
Anonymous No.279691466 [Report]
>>279688438
Looks like HE has returned
Anonymous No.279691529 [Report]
This manga is genuinely terrible. Axe this shit as soon as possible.

Thanks for the dump tho
Anonymous No.279691676 [Report] >>279691731
>>279691347
It was established in the chapter that the villagers didn't even have food and mead, i.e. they're poor. Destitute peasants don't have the money to just move wherever they want. They also didn't know or expect that anyone was coming to help them, hence why they had agreed to just go raid the neighboring village to save their own. The guy the kids met even told them to avoid the village entirely. How are you having so much trouble following a story intended for Japanese teenagers?
Anonymous No.279691731 [Report] >>279691863
>>279691676
?????? the fuck is wrong with your brain?? i am talking about broad narrative inconsistency, and you bring village and shit.
Anonymous No.279691766 [Report]
>>279690332
>>279690718
I also think that but with the state of jump and with shit like nue kill blue and shinobi surviving this might have a chance
Anonymous No.279691774 [Report]
>>279688976
Close enough
Anonymous No.279691863 [Report] >>279691961 >>279692008
>>279691731
What inconsistency? The MC wants to defeat the ice kingdom so he goes to fight them. This is about as simple as things get. Also why do you write like a 12-year old?
Anonymous No.279691961 [Report] >>279693168
>>279691863
No, if you just want to die,. like Sixten warn about, see inconsistent.
Anonymous No.279692008 [Report] >>279693168
>>279691863
so sixten got letter from a king, to fight ice kingdom. why not go THERE or with ARMY, instead always go solo mission.
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>>279688544
Yay for leg girl, but did she suddenly grow pants? She was wearing shorts before.
Anonymous No.279692189 [Report]
>>279688544
Google tells me old skates existed 4000+ years ago. Ice skating with Etupirko!
Anonymous No.279692205 [Report]
>>279692137
Magic pants
Kawaguchi already suffering from the weekly grind
Anonymous No.279692610 [Report]
>>279692137
We don't know for certain how much time passed between them meeting the guy on the way to the village and them actually arriving in the village. But any time could be enough for her to be like "okay, we're walking into a fight, better put on my ass kicking pants"
Anonymous No.279692704 [Report]
>>279692137
I thinks it's that she equipped them for fighting.
Anonymous No.279692949 [Report]
>>279692137
Easier to do movement styling/shading I guess. Bare legs pull more focus to warped shape/muscles.
Anonymous No.279693075 [Report]
Making love to Otr's bussy
Anonymous No.279693095 [Report] >>279693343
>>279688765
>>279688771
>>279688932
>>279689362
>>279689795
>>279690325
>>279691221
You don't have to repeat yourself
Anonymous No.279693167 [Report]
>>279688405
Anonymous No.279693168 [Report]
>>279691961
Like the way he died in this chapter? Their approach is clearly working fine because they're just fighting whatever advance forces the ice kingdom has on the front lines. They're not parachuting right into the heart of the enemy army or something.

>>279692008
They're not going there with an army because they're not facing an army, just a random band of raiders like the one Otr soloed in chapter 1.
Anonymous No.279693343 [Report]
>>279693095
take your meds retard
Anonymous No.279693563 [Report]
Better than last chapter

>>279688035 (OP)
Feet
Anonymous No.279693648 [Report] >>279693778
>>279688544
>iceskates
>to fight against the ice kingdom
Anonymous No.279693778 [Report]
>>279693648
There is a chance she could be an ice spirit user!
Anonymous No.279695074 [Report] >>279695188
Nice that the pacing has been fastter than Red Hood but this arc would've been better with the Queen of this manga in place of the boring loli
Anonymous No.279695188 [Report]
>>279695074
She will join them evenly...
Anonymous No.279695229 [Report]
>>279688040
ENTER EDITOR-SAMA
he had to tardwrangle this retard
Anonymous No.279695448 [Report]
>>279688677
Meh. Only the goth hebe stands out.
Anonymous No.279695635 [Report]
>>279688438
ADOLF???
Anonymous No.279695660 [Report]
>>279688677
it's whatever, but it seems like it's moving in the right direction
Anonymous No.279695712 [Report]
Did it trend at all?
Anonymous No.279695776 [Report] >>279696244 >>279696473 >>279697307
I'll keep reading it for the lolis
Anonymous No.279696244 [Report]
>>279695776
Based
Anonymous No.279696313 [Report] >>279696576
the characters are way too young
it's like toddlers aged? like they look like they're 7 or 8
also red hood had tons of big titties monsters and this manga only has one and she's already been sidelined
Anonymous No.279696356 [Report]
>>279691347
Why don't you ask that of the countless villages that have been conquered throughout history?
Anonymous No.279696473 [Report]
>>279695776
Same. It's a bit funny considering how all the talk about this manga revolved around gorilla women at the start.
Anonymous No.279696528 [Report]
finally, a fucking fight at last
Anonymous No.279696576 [Report]
>>279696313
I think they're supposed to be 10-12. Although them being 8 would also be fine.
Anonymous No.279697307 [Report] >>279698969
>>279695776
Same. Loli legs give me life.
Anonymous No.279697518 [Report]
Damn not bad for chapter 1. I like it!
Anonymous No.279697747 [Report] >>279698644
I'm guessing this first guy is the tutorial fight to show what Otr has learned and then after that there will be a more threatening enemy that actually requires some effort to defeat.
Anonymous No.279698487 [Report] >>279700282
>>279688672
>Starting in 1976, during excavations of the city of York, UK, 42 pairs of Viking-era ice skates were found at Coppergate
They were usually made out of bone, however
>The earliest known skate to use a metal blade was found in Fennoscandia, and was dated to 200 AD
Anonymous No.279698644 [Report]
>>279697747
>tutorial fight
Otr really feels more like the script for a videogame rather than the plot for a manga, at least so far.
Anonymous No.279698969 [Report] >>279699150 >>279699245
>>279697307
>3 different dress style in 3 chapters
not a good sign.
Anonymous No.279699150 [Report] >>279699576
>>279698969
How so?
Anonymous No.279699245 [Report] >>279699576
>>279698969
elaborate on that.
Anonymous No.279699576 [Report] >>279699640
>>279699150
>>279699245
inconsistent design or he isnt sure on her design
Anonymous No.279699640 [Report] >>279699878
>>279699576
Or he likes to play dress up.
Anonymous No.279699878 [Report] >>279700025
>>279699640
>he
Anonymous No.279700025 [Report] >>279700142
>>279699878
I meant Kawaguchi. Sometimes mangaka will have a character they like to dress up in different outfits like Togashi with Killua.
Anonymous No.279700142 [Report] >>279700393
>>279700025
I meant, he likes to draw leather leg on female.
Anonymous No.279700282 [Report] >>279700554
>>279698487
Not that anon, but for real?
Vikings invented skating?
Wow.
Anonymous No.279700337 [Report]
>>279691355
>That pic
Wild times we live in that Red Hood, an axed manga, is getting its own anime.
Anonymous No.279700393 [Report]
>>279700142
>I meant, he likes to draw leather leg on female.
Look at that chapulin.
Anonymous No.279700554 [Report] >>279700588
>>279700282
>Vikings invented skating?
The first ice skates are from thousands of years before the Viking era. But they were invented in that area.
Anonymous No.279700588 [Report]
>>279700554
Darn. The more you know...
Anonymous No.279700834 [Report] >>279700888 >>279700926 >>279701468
I have hope but the main cast has got to improve. A shota mc with a twink spirit partner isn't gonna cut it.
Anonymous No.279700888 [Report]
>>279700834
linkbros...
Anonymous No.279700926 [Report]
>>279700834
>Fylgja
>twink
Anonymous No.279701468 [Report] >>279702008
>>279700834
Just bring Alajoki back.
Anonymous No.279702008 [Report] >>279703742
>>279701468
She will appear soon.
Anonymous No.279703742 [Report] >>279704336 >>279706098
>>279702008
gross
Anonymous No.279704336 [Report] >>279704374
>>279703742
hey anon, >>>/lgbt/ is two blocks down.
Anonymous No.279704374 [Report]
>>279704336
If Kawaguchi showed Otr willy while bathing as training the series would get a niche
Anonymous No.279704624 [Report]
Kawaguchi is a lolicon and the giant women were his way of over-compensating
or not. but it would be funny if it's true.
Anonymous No.279705965 [Report]
Otr won
Anonymous No.279706098 [Report]
>>279703742
>Absolute virgin that doesn't get the appeal of muscle mommies with a little bit of fat.
Go back to your barbie dolls