Thread 280244682

Could you fix her?

>>280244682 (OP)
Why should I?

Let me guess, she's the most beautiful girl in school that loves the generic MC because he was nice to her?

>>280244960
She's a 33 year old asocial mangaka that lusts after a kid half her age because she's a pent-up pervert.

>>280245166
>lusts after a kid half her age
Same shit then

>>280245171
>most of what I said was wrong but I'm still right
ok

dumping the last few chapters

>>280245211
I'm always right

I love how huge Sushi's tits are

Come on, 2 more chapters. Go go go.

>>280246685
give me a break, I'm posting this from my tablet

Will we see the Mahjong Demon ever again?

/a/ makes a guest appearance this chapter

>>280247093
She is plainly cute

>>280244682 (OP)
>that art
>female author
>"seinen"

literally pissed on her own biggest victory
taking a small break

>>280247268
We don't talk enough about the general shoujofication of seinen that's occurred over the last decade. There are so many nominally seinen titles now written by women where the male lead seems to be their dream guy

Why can't I post Noa in Sumire threads and vice versa?

>>280247794
who says you can't?

>>280247477
Should have used a piss bottle

>>280248382
Damn, this hag is strong.

what a huge girlfuckup
that's all for now

>>280248471
I personally thought this as a new level of low, but thankfully it gets worse in a few chapters.
Every woman other than his classmate is insane in this, but Sumire and Sushi cap them all.

>>280248581
what happens

>>280248581
It's funny how Ayumi is initially treated to be on par to them for mostly being a victim. The story is very fast to make it clear that she's a much better person once you get passed her surface though, aside from also being a boyfucker

Artwise, Noa is better.
Storywise, Sumire is better.

>>280246288
>>280246249
s-sexo?

>>280249112
I don't think she's ever portrayed to be as bad as them personality wise, but her shitty personal life decisions, taste in men, and involvement in such a scummy industry are all points against her.

>>280249133
sumire is a hag in a funny way while noa is a hag in a scary way
noa genuinely scares me

>>280246848
Literally me!

Sumire-chan... Your dignity...

>>280244682 (OP)
The evolution of this Manga is amazing, it begins kinda wholesome but little by little it becomes Tomoko adult edition, but is worse because at least Tomoko is a kid, these are 30+ adult women and little by little with every chapter, they get worse than Tomoko.

So aside from Sumire, the other 3 hags all want Yuusei's dick right?
Sumire herself is unfixable. I thought she got better after she what she did the last few chapters too.

>>280250985
>has a genius idea to rescue the photobook's sales and sacrifices her hair to do it
>proceeds to piss herself in cosplay
>tries to take Souko's pay and breaks her arm in the process
One step forward two steps back.

>>280246416
>>280246449
Damn, this is getting gay

>>280250447
Yeah, it's pretty great. There's a commitment to the heroine being a real piece of shit that's hard to find usually.

i wish the faces don't look ridiculous for most of the manga

>>280250985
I feel like she is like gintoki,the kinda girl who can't do everything prefect

>>280244682 (OP)
She's my ideal woman, I would shift heaven and earth for her.

>>280252695
She's not interested in your expired dick, she wants Yuu-P's underage dick ONLY

>>280252898
My love will shine through her delusions

>>280252595
gin-san chooses to be a loser
sumire is a loser

>>280248246
This actually made me really mad. After all she did they did not even give her at least 100k yen, and why would he take the money and pay the oldman the gamble bet when we know that the gramps enjoyed the hell out the game he had with Sumire and the girls.

Pure bullshit, Sumire had all the rigth to go insane.

>>280244960
bot post

>>280253251
Did you forget that Sumire stole 3 million yen to buy a motorcycle (only to be stolen the very next day)? If anything, she is not punished enough.

Give Sumire 600k and the money would be gone by tomorrow

>>280253549
Hey it's NOT her fault it was stolen.

>>280253549
She needs to be corrected. She's not too old.

>>280253549
The fact that a motorcycle got stolen and they didn't do anything about it bothers me. Didn't they tell the cops? I don't think it's that easy to steal an expensive motorcycle and get away with it.

>>280248093
Truly the girl I would simp for.
Sushikarma love.

>bro, bro, BRO!
>have you seen the latest heckin Sumire-san gravure shot I just prodoooced?
>it's le hecking epic!

He should just date Femme.

None of the other girls are good enough for him.

>>280255500
shut up femme

>this month I'm 32yo
>older than Sumire
I'm not even younger than the hags in my hag manga.

>>280254888
she bought it with stolen money, i guess getting the police involved might have made things worse

>>280256069
The people she stole the money from are still with her though, it's not like she stole it from random people. They want true motorcycle back too, so that they could sell it and get some money back.

>>280255932
Sushi's still older than you

Sushi

>>280248213
I want those coupons.

To be honest, I don’t want more characters. After Sushi Karma, I can’t imagine what more the 2 remaining idol group members can bring to the table.

>>280247526
I'm deceased

>>280260013
I'm not sure we're getting those two, their faces have always been hidden while the 3 girls had their faces shown since the start.

>>280246449
>Reverse trap hag and her underage crush

What's this?
Time travel to the far future (past) of the year Chapter 51!?

>>280261660
kek of course

I really wish we'd get an anime.

>>280261910
>>280261930
>>280261945
bruh

Ok so, Sushi Karma had a nightmare that Yuu-P and Sumire were fucking, then she drew a doujin with Yuu-P as the MMC, not sure who the FMC is but I'm guessing her, Sumire saw her WIP doujin, and for some reason took her iPad to Yuu-P's Mom? Yuu-P comes back home but Sumire tries to ignore him, afterwards she speaks into his in her underwear while his Mom smokes outside on the steps?

>>280262047
Female owners of bars are called mama, that's not her mom

>>280262208
I know but I'm pretty sure that woman is Yuusei's mother.

>>280262208
No, she is really her mom and Sumires aunt

I know this was brought up before but is Yuusei genuinely gay? How is a teenage boy like him not hard 24/7?

>>280263083
He grew up around these disgusting slobs. Ask any anon with neet big sisters how he feels about them.

Can Japanese even marry their cousins? I know in America it's consider a taboo but people from some countries don't hold that opinion.

I'm genuinely shocked that Noa isn't surrounded by a mountain of series

Is femme fatale technically a girlsuccess?

>>280263649
I believe 2nd cousin's are on the table

>>280261771
It's pretty sad that she draws digital and the art is this bad. Look at the all hands and the fucking heel in panel 3

>>280262047
>not sure who the FMC is but I'm guessing her
the fmc is sumire, she drew what she dreamt
>>280262047
>Sumire saw her WIP doujin, and for some reason took her iPad to Yuu-P's Mom
sumire saw it and asked yuusei's mom on how she views the relationship between sumire and yuusei
>>280262047
>afterwards she speaks into his in her underwear while his Mom smokes outside on the steps?
she's drunk after entertaining the geezers at the bar, so she reverts back to her natural self (ie. a slob that relies on yuusei)
yuusei's mom is commenting on how yuusei takes care of sumire more than the reverse

>>280261705
Yeah, she's a cuck. I don't think she has feelings for Yuusei, only pure lust.

>>280263649
Yes, based on the numerous doujins and manga I've read, cousins, even first cousins can get legally married.

>>280263962
Is yuuseis mom technically a winner since yuusei isn't a piece of shit and is genuinely going to make something of himself.

>>280264082
yes, because yuusei will make something of himself
no, because he will marry sumire and be forced to be her tardwrangler for life

>>280263962
Yeah seeing it again made it clear that it was supposed to be Sumire in the doujin.

So Yuusei's Mom didn't say anything about Sumire sneaking into his bed in her underwear then?

>>280263962
>more than the reverse
Does the reverse happen at all? Yuusei is literally fixing her entire life.

>>280264296
>>So Yuusei's Mom didn't say anything about Sumire sneaking into his bed in her underwear then?
sumire's claim to his mom is that she has been spoiling yuusei too much (hence the sudden cold shoulder to scale back on it), but when she gets drunk yuusei pampers her which makes yuusei's mom question who is really is being pampered here on the last page

Is sumire a virgin?

>>280246449
Carrying his little body around...

>>280264729
It would be sad if she is

>>280247477
>>280247526
This woman is a lost cause

>>280247652
Imagine Yusei's pain right now. Seeing his idol doing something cool for once after a decade and then she fucks it all up like this.

>>280248246
Is her debt paid off now?
>>280265055
I think strangling sushi and nearly losing her life is probably worse. A fall like that enough to fracture her arm could have easily split her skull.

>>280260013
yep, manga already peaked at Souko

How can yuusei get away with dyeing his hair while in school?

>>280265205
>Is her debt paid off now?
she lost 3 mil, the earned roughly 6 this chapter, of which she gets like 10%
still a good 2.5 mil to go I suspect

>>280248093
Look at this grandma thinking she's a young girl! Laugh at her!!!
All joking aside I'm happy she actually did something. She deserves being happy.

>>280253251
Shut up, Sumire! Femme Fatale is being nice with you.

>>280248354
>Brat
>Is older than her

>>280248406
I love Femme Fatale encouraging Sushi here.

>>280265786
I think sumire is her senior professionally as an idol no?

>>280261660
Truly best girl.

>>280255500
She is slowly grooming him. Only a matter of time before she gets her best employee

>>280261815
>Taking the tablet.
Oh shit. There is no hiding it now.

>>280261875
Lost cause, I tell you.

>>280263083
Professionals have standards. You don't put your hands on your talent.

>>280263995
What gave that away?

>>280247897
It's pretty funny Sumire's author went from a nothing burger story to writing a very funny one.
While Noa's senpai author went from writing a decent story to a nothing burger story

>>280260013
>>280260691
Unico's probably the next one but I'm not sure how involved she'll get.

>>280266346
I just read the manga from Noa's mangaka about the stalker. Way darker than I thought the mangaka would be.
Also just realise the Sumire's mangaka made that one about the hag grooming the highschool boy with food.

>>280266346
Noa's pretty funny too, it's just disturbing and frustrating in a unique way

>>280248382
>sushikarma's entire neck squishing up her chin

>>280259676
>>280248213
>sumire is too dumb to realize coupons for rice cooked by femme fatale could easily be sold for like 20k each

>>280268216
I'm pretty sure they're for uncooked rice

>>280261685
Why is she still living in Sumire's closet? I thought she moved in with her to help with her weight loss for the photoshoot.

>>280247477
Piss bros... We are eating well today

>>280263782
That's a rough draft that she sketched in a single night. I think her final work is supposed to look more like this.

So Souko's livelihood is through doujin making? Does she do part time jobs too?


>>280259676
>>280268216
>>280269087
>>280269498
The value of the rice would go up if Femme would piss on the rice.

>>280269411
She is like a lewd Doraemon.

>>280269568
makes sense, no clue why she censored something thats for her eyes only or is just a draft

>>280269638
Only the page she showed to Yusei's mom is censored, so maybe Sumire added it out of shame? Or maybe it's only censored to 'us' but not in-universe.

That aside, it's one hell of a move to show your sister porn drawings of you and her son.

>>280269600
She's never shown doing anything other than drawing doujin and I can't see her working any kind of regular part time job.

what chapter are the raws up to now?

>>280271567
According to this https://yanmaga.jp/comics/%E5%B9%B3%E6%88%90%E6%95%97%E6%AE%8B%E5%85%B5%E3%81%99%E3%81%BF%E3%82%8C%E3%81%A1%E3%82%83%E3%82%93 63 chapters.

>>280248471
doesn't hit the same for some reason

>>280244682 (OP)
Only shota pp can fix her.

Read the one-shot about 2 years ago, quite enjoy it. How's the series so far compared to it?

Other series I read from artist I think is the long neck but sad it was...short?

>>280247093
The real girl failure of the story.

>>280247477
>>280247526
Nyo...

>>280273942
Girlfailure? She has a successful carrer!

>>280273592
>How's the series so far compared to it?
A lot crazier but more fun.

>>280248093
God she's retarded.
I love her.

I can't tell who is grooming who in this manga...

>>280271567
63

>>280248471
>Gets character development cut
>Becomes worse

>>280246572
NISIOOOOOOOO!

She is cute when she cries.

>>280279788
Must be hard being a 33yo girlfailure(and I say this as a 32yo NEET).

>>280266346
>While Noa's senpai author went from writing a decent story
Are you insane?

>>280266346
Noa is much better than the shit edgy stalker manga

>>280261660
>>280261685
>>280261705
>>280261724
This would be so sad if it wasn't so fucking funny.

>>280261645
>he cums inside
Now that's what I call wincest

>>280261910
She's a failure of a person
She's greedy, jaded and short-sighted
She has absolutely zero discipline with money and any buck earned or given to her would be wasted
She would ruin any man who bothered trying to "fix her"
But that look... It just makes me feel like it would all be worth it at the end if I could go to sleep with her by my side...
This manga is dangerous, it makes me wanna give a girl like that a chance IRL

>>280281158
do it you fucking coward, you won't

Oh yea now we're getting somewhere.

>>280281158
Who's gonna tell lil bro that he's just describing women in general?

>>280244682 (OP)
Got bored of this + after the publisher did that DMCA on this despise not being published outside Japan wasn't good at all.
Dropped and unfollowed the author

>>280282022
should've left it at "got bored of this"
if this is about the mangadex thing that's a retarded justification

>>280276853
>36
Oh shit, an advanced hag!

>>280276853
is she also from the loser idol squad? or some sort of rival company producer?

THIS is your idol!?

>>280282319
how graceful

>>280247477
>>280247526
No amount of dickings will ever fix her.

>>280282312
former loser squad producer

>>280282650
a pee bottle would've fixed the situation though

>>280268216
Given the supposed rice shortage she's sitting on more than she would've gotten in cash.

>>280254888
If she had gotten insurance for it, none of this would have been a problem, but she didn't.

>>280248581
I like sushi because she's a degenerate into underage boys.

>>280257194
NTA, but how old was she? I'm 34

>>280283001
Younger than you

She is such a shameless doofus. I wonder what is the lore explanation of why is she single. i like to think that is yusei the one that secretly sabotage every man that gets close to her.

If this ever gets an anime I want sushi to be voiced by Aoi Yuuki.

>>280283185
>small
>big tits
>femcel
>shotacon
Any other choice wouldn't be right.

>>280244682 (OP)
wasn't this the series where the mc wanted to fuck his hot cousin? who is this hag?

>>280283579
I think it was his aunt actually, and he never wanted to fuck her

>>280246449
>>280248382
She literally has super hag strength, wtf.

>>280283579
Literally scroll through the thread retard.

>>280271828
Damn, I’ve used all of my free points. The chubby plain girl is kinda cute. What’s her role?

>>280267539
>Noa's pretty funny too, it's just disturbing and frustrating in a unique way
it's quite clear the author puts a part of herself in noa, I've seen many girls irl act the same way as noa

>>280284880
She's not chubby, this >>280247551 is her.
Looks like she'll collab with Sumire. Definitely gonna get disillusioned.

>>280281158
it's all fun & games until its your money she's spending

>>280284880
She is beautifull, rich, popular and even has a boyfirend. Just what does she see in sumire to make admire her as her oshi ?

>>280285130
probably gave her some words of encouragement at a fan meet & greet or something like that. a treasured memory of her's that sumire doesn't recall at all

>>280284982
That’s her? She’s the 28-years-old who stands at the top of the cosplayer world? Her?

>>280285130
Hmm? Is she cheating on her boyfriend?

>>280285209
yup

>>280285209
Read the chapter and put two and two together.
>>280285243
The guy doing her is her boyfriend. She got a message from Sumire.
Even if it's from another woman, it's gotta sting a little to be making love with your girlfriend and suddenly she's completely taken out of the moment by a message.

>>280285130
She doesn't know how much of a fuckup Sumire is. Probably admires her from her idol days and for being so naturally pretty.

>>280283115
She has nothing going for her aside from her body, she's not smart, very reckless, a big fuck up, gambling addict, heavy smoker and drinker, short sighted, has no money and even steals money from others, and too old for that to be fun. No one would want to date her, most they'll want is a quick fuck.
>>280283579
>>280283728
It's still confusing whether she's his Aunt or Cousin.

>>280285533
Doesn't she call Yusei's mom her sister?

>>280285580
They've called each other cousins many times too though

Maybe she’s both his aunt and his cousin

>>280287018
Soon she'll also be his wife

>>280285130
>used goods
Dropped.

>>280285533
>It's still confusing whether she's his Aunt or Cousin.
>still
anon they say it twice in chapter 1

>>280285130
I'm angery

>>280287979
>>280288381
she's a normie, a normie with a weird fixation on sumire, but still a normie
of course she's gonna have an active sex life, makes an even bigger contrast with sumire & co

>>280288419
This makes me wonder, is Femme Fatale a virgin?

>>280288419
Fucking normals

>>280266151
Femme Fatale is the best groomer. So lowkey and quiet at the task.
I also give props to Ayumi. Shes de-gyaruing from a slutty gyaru to just a Marin-gyaru for Yuu-P.

>>280288167
Yeah I know, but sometimes it feels like she's his Mother's Sister.

>>280289271
Hahahahahaha no

So, the manga is basically about a somewhat smart kid getting a harem of girl failure hags?
Based

>>280290151
>She probably isn't
Sigh
>>280290624
Yeah it's wonderful

>>280266346
I believe Satomi has simply reverted back to her original self

>>280261724
I know it’s not her home but isn’t it a bit cruel that they let Sushi to sleep inside the closet?

>>280291229
Does the boy at least get to insert his wiener into one of the sailor scouts?

>>280244682 (OP)
This cover makes me suspect all of the girls in it are whores

I thought she was a 31 year old ex-idol

>>280289271
>>280290151
In the earlier chapters wasn't she talking about how she got married and divorced 2 times in one year?

Who would win?
>Three 30+ year old hags
VERSUS
>One precocious 16 year old boy.

>>280292595
>One precocious 16 year old boy.

>One precocious 16 year old boy selling the hags dreams of stardom and success and unconditional devotion

The hags never stood a chance

>>280292674
>Was able to convince his hot washout aunt to dress in sexy clothes and let him take pictures of her
Yuusei is a menace.

>>280292754
He unironically could probably already be fucking her if he wanted to. She nearly signed on to the washed up idol AV contract. Yuusei could do the same by setting up a subscription site and he just wears a mask the whole time.

A more perfect manga exists in our brains that this world allows

is this irl reference?

>>280293006
Not really. Naoko Takeuchi, the creator of Sailor Moon was very cute. Anno's wife Moyoco is a pretty successful mangaka and was really cute when she was young too.

>>280293006
No, she is just seething.

>>280291229
Wait wait wait. The cover of that doujin is reminding me of the doujin where the futa sister fucks her little brother (and gets her friends involved in the sequel). Is that really the same author?

>>280293612
>it actually is her
Holy shit, she's a freak and I have more appreciation for this manga now.

>>280291344
No it's okay, she likes living like Doraemon

>>280292475
Yeah she is

>>280244682 (OP)
Anon I can't even fix myself.