>>280626926 (OP) >"everything in that place might still be conscious" >things show up and talk showing they are conscious >completely abandons them anyway
What an asshole.
>>280628017
I think these are the thoughts of people who were trapped there before him, not of him himself. At least that's what seems to be the case reading them.
>>280628392
HNNNGH YAMERO >>280632000
I WILL DROP THIS IF THAT'S THE CASE >>280632192
he can tank it and he has other bros, moesawa is getting abused left and right
>>280628295
man, hitsujiya's entire thing is emotional sensitivity
how does he have this blind spot when it comes to poor moesawa
at least let mr gorilla in
the intrigue is cool and all, but I get this empty feeling from this manga as well
it's hard to describe
as if it's still in the introductory phase
like it hasn't found its footing yet
I think maybe there's just not enough coherency to the plot
many plot hooks, but no payoffs
I know it's early, but usually you would get some small resolutions by now and some grander logic would begin to emerge
>>280633426
Maybe that's the joke. Dude can empathize with nearly everything but overlooks the one person who is practically throwing the heart on her sleeve at him
I like this manga, it has several parts that are very compelling and interesting in it, but I feel that it's still too early in it. I think I'll put it on pause and come back when there are about 15 or 20 or 30 chapters.
>>280627757 >>280627721
im surprised he did immediately get killed or got kicked out, i guess some hacks aren't super rigid in how they perform their actions
>>280626926 (OP) >>280627393 >>280627448
The appearance of the world is mesmerizing and really gives the impression of another world. This artist is really great for this work.
I wonder what it would be like if he adapted OPM manga instead of Murata? Would his art be better for it than even the pre-MA arc Murata?
>>280652010
I'm roughly a third of a way through Shinobuna and I haven't even heard of any gorillas yet, so if it hits a peak, at least it doesn't do it super early on.
>>280636873
That seems to be a writing quirk of One's. He tends to be very mixed in terms of quality and payoff. I enjoyed this chapter, but it hasn't quite reached the heights of the first five chapters since. I'll let it simmer though. Monthly series tend to have pacing issues that bring out these feelings. And I'm still holding out for gorillaman to join the crew.
>>280652205
this desu, what would she add to the group? hitsujiya is the funny guy and doesn't think twice to try a hack, kokudo is the chill guy and keeps their feet on the ground, and yuki is the turbo autist girl
>>280658570
I would say that's probably what's happening. It is not saying what Hatsujiya is thinking, it's parroting previous trespassers, menacingly.