Thread 280741573

Dumping the latest chapter with first draft of the TL.

page 1
>Let’s battle some more!!

>>280741603
page 2
>Nemo:”What?”
>”The star barrage is already over!?”

>”Didn’t you have to beat 30 pokemon within a time limit? I haven’t even fought half of that amount!”
>GruntA:”Uhm, that’s because a bunch of the other grunts left so this is all that is left.

>Nemo:”But the rules of the raid(grumble)”

>”That’s it! I’ll wait for you to heal up so you can go again!”
>Grunts:”Whaaaat.”

>GruntB:””She is a real pain in the butt.”
>GruntA:”Yeah, let’s ask the outcast house for backup.

>GruntB:”I wonder if they’ll even show up.”
>GruntA:”Just try and give it a shot.”

>Nemo:”I guess I’ll just cheer on Letty until the Star barrage restarts! ”

page 3
>Youssef:”It’s here.”

>Gruntc:”Yo, Youssef-kun.”
>GruntD:”Hm? Who’s that?”

>”Is that your grampa?”

>Clive:”T-the name’s Clive and I am a full-fledged student of the academy.”
>”I am asking around about the truant students that joined team star.”

>GruntC:”Soo, you’re one of the academy’s goons?”
>Clive:”No, I am…..”
>GruntE:”Well it doesn’t matter either way."

page 4
>Clive:”You lot are the grunts of the poison crew right?”
>”Why are you guys here when Violet is in the middle of a raid?”
>Grunt:”It’s precisely, because of that that we are here.”

>GruntD:”We can’t handle conflict and showdowns all that well….”
>”And it’s because of that that we ran away from our homes and the academy.”

>GruntC:”I don’t know how to put it…. but lately.”

>Clive:”I already heard it from the fire crew, things have changed since real delinquents joined team star or so it seems….”
>GruntC:”Exactly.”

>”things like not getting made light of or riding on the coattails of strong pokemon….. ”
>“That’s all they ever go on about….”

>GruntE:”they keep treating us like gophers and making us do things like cleaning up and weeding.”
>”However, they never do it themselves.”

page 5
>”On a whim or to kill time they force you into a pokemon battle under the guise of training, but”
>”But they only do it with kids who are either weak or bad at battling.”

>”It was really suffocating so we made our own refuge.”
>”This place is the shelter within team star,”
>”The outcast house.”

>GruntC:”Team Star currently is just like”
>”Uva academy before Operation Star don’t you think?”

page 6
>GruntB:”Heeeeeey”

>GruntE:”Is the raid over?”
>GruntB:”No that’s not why I’m here…..”
>”Can you help us with the star barrage, even just standing around is fine.”
> GruntD:”What’s this all about?”

>GruntB:”A lot of the other grunts fled. So there are only like 10 pokemon around for the star barrage.”
>GruntB:”So when the girl who came to raid us defeated all of them she said [It has to be 30 just like the rule said] and she won’t back off about it.”
>CLive:(Could that be Nemona-san?)

>GruntE:”What does the boss say about this?”
>GruntB:”The thing is…”
>”The boss already came out to fight with the star mobile.”
>”They came to raid us with a group of 2.”

>Grunt:”It all sounds like a mess.”
>grunt:”Can’t we just disband the poison crew already?”
sfx:purupuru
>Grunt:”Please don’t say that~.”

page 7
>!marvin:”Atticus-dono!”
>Clive:”Youssef!”

sfx:dodododo

>Letty:”I wanted to bring out Armarouge….”

>”Because of the Muk’s attack by staining the ground with its poison,”
>”my eyesight has been messed with!”

>Atticus:”Fuhahahahaha”
>”Have a taste of my ninja art the roogan jutsu!”
[I have no idea what the fuck ローガン is supposed to mean in this context. best I can find is that it is how nips spell logan. I just went with a direct transliteration. the best I can figure out that is something eye(gan) but I have no idea what eye it is supposed to be.]

page 8
>”Toxic!!”
sfx:bafuh

>Letty:”At the very least I should heal its poisoning....””
sfx:guta…

para para
>Letty:”It’s not working!?”

>Atticus:”Fuhahahaha! That is not an antidote! It is a paralyze heal!”

>”Finish it!”
>”Bite!”

>Letty:”Circle throw”
sfx:bun!

page 9
bosu!

>Atticus:”Hmph! To think you possessed a fighting type move! You successfully misleaded me!”

>”Go muk!”

>Letty:”Armarouge!”
sfx:shah

bomu

>Letty:”....ku!”

>Nemo:”Wai…, Letty!”

>”What’s going on right now?'”

page 10
>!marv:”Fuhahaha!”

>”That is my one of my compadre’s ninja moves,”
>”The roogan jutsu!”

>Nemo:”THe roogan justsu!?”

>”Or rather, who even are you?”

>Atticus:”Hi-Hironobu?”

>!marv:”I have missed you, Atticus-dono.”
>Atticus:”Me you tool! It’s been far too long.”

>Atticus:”By the way! That TV show aired the other day!”
>!marv:”I have already seen it ofcourse!”
>!Atticus:”I wonder if the shape of that shuriken and that stance was created by the show…..”
>!marc:”...I wish I could have watched the show while sharing our impressions and knowledge….”
>Atticus:”T-the same goes for me as well…!”

Most battles aren’t really impressive nowadays, but I appreciate they’ve at least given a fun twist where Scarlet can’t see.

Page 11
>Letty:”Quick Attack!!”
sfx:”batsuh”

>!Marc:”Atticus-dono! You have to save our idle chatter for later and focus on the battle right now!”
>Atticus:”You’re right.”

>”Sludge wave!”

sfx:”dopopopo”

page 12
>!marv:”My apologies for the late introduction, I am Atticus-dono’s compadre Youssef. ”
>Nemo:”Aha, So you’re one of his ninja otaku friends?”
>!marv:”Our friendship is far deeper than that!”

>Nemo:”Yeah yeah, tell me more about this roogan jutsu.”

>!Marv:”Through poison mess with one’s eyesight.”

>”She can’t accurately grasp the shape or color of things that are right in front of her eyes.”

>”With this there is no way for her to choose which pokemon or item she wants to use!”

>Nemo:”And that is why she used floragito by mistake…”

>Letty:”Armarouge….!”
sfx:bomu

page 13
>Letty:”Come back!”
sfx:shapon

>Nemo:”Seems like she atleast knows she used the wrong pokemon when she brings them out.”

>”hm?”

>Clive:”*pant *pant I finally made it here!”

>Nemo:”Hea… Clive…..san!”

sfx:*stare

>CLive:”I-is there something on my face?”

page 14
>Nemo:”She can’t see her pokemon in her hands.”
>”But she can tell when she brings them out[she can see them from a distance.]”
>”roogan jutsu, rougan… farsightedness .”
[he is going from ロ-ガン to ろ-がん to ろうがん farsigthedness. roogan is probably ろうがん(老眼) which means farsightedness. I’ll keep it in japanese since it wasn’t clear for the characters either.]

>”That’s what it is!?”

>”Clive let me borrow your glasses!”
sfx:gabah

>”Letty, put these on! you should be able to see your team with it!”

sfx:bah

>Letty:”uh…!”

sfx:woozy

page 15
koten!

>Nemo:”huuuh!?”
>”why!?”

>Clive:”Nemo, I am not clear on the details, but is Violet in a state that is similar to having farsightedness?"

>Nemo:”Yes!”

>Clive:”If you put on glasses with the wrong prescription you’ll only get dizzy and a headache. ”

>Letty:”...Don't do anything unnecessary! ”
sfx:patsuh

>Atticus:”Fuhahaha! It’s not just because of the glasses!”
>”You won’t even be able to stand once the poison progresses far enough!”

sfx:”bomu!”

page 16
>Letty:”psybeam!”
sfx:gyukukuku

>Atticus:”Night slash!”
sfx:zakuh

>Nemo:”aah!”

>letty:”...”

page 17
>(It’s no use….)
>(Even far off things seem distorted now….)

>(Anything more than this and….)

sfx:roll..

sfx:”roll roll roll”

page 18
>Atticus:”I won!”
>”I really won!”

>”fuha…”
>”fuhahahaha!”

sfx:”gatsun”
>”Whoah…!”

>”Wha-what’s happening!”
sfx:rumble rumble
Thats's all folks
Sorry for the delay I really wanted to do this earlier since I hate putting things off, but I was really busy.
I promise next chapter won't take as long.
As usual I will take another look later and if you happen to know some nip yourself and see a mistake or have any questions than please feel free.

https://pastebin.com/9hx2HpRZ

forgot the pastebin

>>280741702
I think the fact that attacking the trainer is a valid option still makes it somewhat unique to other things in the franchise.

>>280741817
OK, thanks

>>280741573 (OP)
Volumen 65 when?

>>280743538
Delayed by another 3 months

>>280741817
Thanks tlanon

>>280743538
When hell has offically frozen over apparently.

>>280741681
Uh oh

>>280741621
Complete rampage

>>280743538
When editor-san wakes up from his eternal nap

>>280741722
Ninja buddies

>>280741621
Can anything satisfy nemona

>>280743538
Editor still hasn't approved the new manuscript by the way.

>>280752166
Champion level battle

>>280741817
>I won
Doomed himself

>>280741722
Marven (Paldean) sure is smug

OP, would you ever consider translating some Adventures doujins (sfw)? I’ve been seeing some from Zeromaru and Yui that have been popping up more and more. I hope I didn’t ask this already, I’ve honestly forgotten, sorry if I did.

>>280741817
Thanks tlanon

>>280756784
Power of friendship can't be beaten.

>>280743538
Volumen 65 announcement after the Presents, trust the plan

>>280758363
Made me realize there was a presents soon I completely forgot about it

I took a second look and besides wording some shit better and Letty not saying Amrmarouge's full name here>>280741722
I don't see any big mistakes that need immediate fixing(though I'm a sloppy person so I might have overlooked something)
Proofread anon is gonna clean up the script anyway so no point in correcting it now.

>>280756890
To be frank no.
I do sometimes tl random stray one page fanart, but besides that and this manga that is all that I TL.
I am still very much a furigana baby that has been slacking on his anki grinds for the past 2 or 3 week and most doujins don't have those.
I could potentially do it, but there is much larger chance for me to make mistakes.
I am still very much underqualified to tl this series if I have to be honest.
That being said you can post the doujin and I can take a look at it, but I won't make any promises.

>>280760238
Fair play, don’t wanna force you into doing something you aren’t confident in.

https://e-hentai.org/g/3403035/7b3b3c2fc6/

Of the ones I was describing, this is probably the shortest, due to there being a fair amount of inbetween pages with little or no dialogue.